One Wish

Im finally done with drawing and Im glad. Im going to enter this into a contest, wish me luck, haha.
http://melek-mais.deviantart.com/#/d35nlu0

Good luck!!

Your drawing skills are very, very impressive

You will win this contest!!

Taylor

this is a very good piece... good luck!

Overall this is good, I especially like the hair. The only things I noticed were that the person on the right's chin looks a bit off somehow ... maybe too long? And that the hands look slightly odd, too bendy. I think they could use some more straight lines.

But besides those things, this is really good. Good luck in your contest!

Hey there!

Overall, it looks like you spent a bit of time on this and I wish you all the best for the competition. However, there are a few nitpicks that I have considering a few things. First of all, like it's been pointed out, the chins seem to be a little too big. You might want to double check chin lengths using reference photos for the best outcome. I think the eyes could have been better, like more shading in a few areas and some details to give them more depth since they're looking at each other, it'd be nice to have the eyes be the main attraction of this picture. Anyway, I like the hair - I always find that to be harder than anything else. -__-

Good luck!
-Pink

well my drawing skills might be impressive but there not the best. Thanks, Taylor.

Thanks Siona.

Yeah, I had a bit trouble with the chin part, I'll see what I can do. And hands arent my best, Im practicing still. Thanks, wolf.

I think I rushed a bit on the eyes, Pink, I'll see bout adding depths to them after all I love the attraction.

Thanks again everyone
-fRiEs