Portraits.

I've been trying to do her right for awhile, but I can't figure what to do... I'm letting you decide what is wrong with her.



Please review!

The first is beautiful, but the second's definately my favorite. You capture so much emotions in your lines, it's amazing. I love the eyes and expression - perfectly natural, completely beautiful. In my opinion, nothing is wrong with her, so stop telling yourself there is. The third's really well-drawn also, but there's just the fact that the image isn't pleasing to the eye (or at least, my eye, but that's a completely personal opinion). For whatever reason, something in it bothered me, but beauty is to the eye of the beholder, and it's still really well-drawn.

These are all gorgeous drawings. Keep it up.

Dear theotherone,

Your pictures are amazing! I wonder how you succeeded in making them so realistic! My favorite is the third one. It shows that you have a wild imagination as well! Keep up the good work!

vstarfirix

P.S. Did you really draw it, or is it drawn by some one else?

1. he arms look a little awkward and the picture's a little small. Her leg pointing backwards is a little funny looking, and her nose is a little to big, well, unless she has a big nose.
2. don't have anything bad to say!
3. I think you're missing a finger.

that's it for bad things. You're good at drawing people, really good. You've mastered eyes, in my opinion. Good job, I like them!

I absolutely love the second two. The second one is by far my favorite. I feel like i can see into her soul and her emotions. It is amazing. Completely Amazing. However the first one is a little strange, there is something odd about her head or chest. I can't quite figure out which one. But other than that I love them all tremendously!

Hey Otherone! =D

1. I really like this picture. I always had a thing for drawing ballerinas or dancers. It must be the way they're bodies are always in a different position and all. Anyway, I think you should erase some of the line marks that was used to define the legs at the bottom of her skirt.

2. I think I like this one the best. It's got a cool feel to it and the eyes are just killer. The shading seems to be a bit messy and quick, maybe you should have spent a little more time defining the details of it, I think it would have been better. Although, I seriously like the eyes. Did you think about coloring them a different color or something to make them stand out? I tried that once before but it didn't really great on mine.

3. Sweeetttt. Is this the picture from that one movie. I forgot what it's called. "The eye?" I don't know but it has Jessica Alba in it. I found that picture for the movie quite creepy but cool at the same time and always wanted to draw it. Seems like I didn't really get the chance but you did a great job with yours. You have a clear idea of what to shade and what not to.

Good job!

-Pink

The Ballerina- I think you should relax her shoulders a bit. It would give a more feminine look.
The Girl- ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE. For some reason the one part of forehead that has no bangs looks odd.
The eye- Amazing.

These are amazing. I like the first one, but the second is my favorite. The last one is very well-drawn, but it kind of creeps me out. Lame review, but I couldn't find anything to change.

Keep writing drawing!
-tuck

Hi there
These are really well drawn, congratulations!
Just a few things I noticed:
The ballerina appears to me at least a little stocky and manly in figure. Also her arms appear to be a little stiff, but that may just be me, I'm by no means an expert when it comes to ballet poses.
The second picture is beautiful, and though I think someone else may have pointed this out, her lack of hair in that one spot on her forehead. Was that intentional? For me it takes away some from the rest of the piece. I'd also just like to mention her eyes are very well done and capture a lot of deep emotion.
The last one I have definitely seen somewhere, but I can't place it! Slightly disturbing especially after the elegant pieces before it but it's still very well drawn. The fingers appear natural and not stiff or block-like.
After seeing them I kind of want to know what's behind them trying to pull itself out of the eye! Gollum? ET? lol

Keep drawing!
~day

hey, otherone!
i love your sketches. especially the second one. i'm not really an expert when it comes to sketches, but i think they're wonderful. keep them up.

I really like all of them.
#1. Maybe give a little more "mobility" to the hands, they seem a little bit stiff. But you got the proportions spot on. I love the pose of the character.
#2. I love it! The hair , the eyes and lips are just amazingly drawn. A little more work on the skin , and I will probably be your #1 fan for life.
#3. I think i saw it somewhere.. But whatever. You really gave the eye the form it has when you are surprised! The detail on it are amazing.

GOOD JOB!
*bows x10*