Girl in the wind

Hey everyone, this is one of my personal favorite pictures, I don’t know why but i just love drawing manga girls in the wind, it’s so cool. Hope you enjoy, oh and I just want to say something my mum always says to me. "If you've got nothing nice to say, don't say anything". ENJOY MY PICTURE.

Hey there!

I really like this picture - and I absolutely love the dress, the shadows are also really good.

Some things you might want to improve on are: Shading, you're girl seems pretty solid in colour, and doesn't seem all too realistic. Try practicing on a scrap paper, and try to gradually start soft and then gradually darker - just to give a more realistic feel to the whole piece, it will give a lot more dimension to your charcter.
The Angle: She seems almost as though she's pressing herself or leaning against a wall, and she seems a little awkward just standing their like that. Try and curve her left (my right) side a little more in future, so that she doesn't seem so stiff.
The Face shape and nose: Her face seems a little squished, and not very symmetrical, which makes me think that she is again leaning against a wall, remember in future to try and get both sides of the face as close in shape as possible if she's looking directly at us. The nose is drawn in a bit of an odd position, and it looks a bit squished on her face, so you could also work on that.

I think the hair and eyes are really gorgeous!

Thanks for posting this - it's really cute - and keep writing... err... drawing. xD

~Mo.

Mo. its a manga drawing, i will take your advice on board but you have to under stand these types of drawings don't need to bee realistic, there suppose to be cartoon.

Like your girl in the wind!! you did a great job the shadows really give the good affect and the letters
finish it off greatly I also like how the cloths flow in that certain way interesting piece of work.....keep it up Lightningbolt

Hello there.

This is a nice drawing, good job with that! I'm not a fan of mangas, but I don't hate them either. I'm more of a realistic drawing kind of girl. But anyways, moving on with the review. I like the style and how the dress floats in the wind. really well done. And I love the eyes.

Great job, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.

-Other One

Hey there!
I'm not a great reviewer of art, but I'll have a go.
First off, although manga generally isn't my type, I think you've done really well! I particularly liked the way her dress swirled and folded at the corners, and the shadows in the folds were excellent. As a manga picture, it's pretty decent.
One thing, though: near her feet, she seems a little out of proportion. Looking at the whole picture, I get the impression that her legs are rather short. But maybe that's just me.
Overall, well done! I enjoyed reviewing this picture.
Keep up with the drawing,
Ignis

Hey there Capn'!

I don't usually review drawings but I'll give it a shot...

I really like this drawing. I can see how it's one of your personal favourites! The shadowing on the dress make it feel more realistic but you keep the tone too solid throughout most of the dress and on the girl. Let the picture become a girl rather than just pencil marks on paper. I think that another picture you could draw is of her but she is facing the wind and you draw her side on. I think that would be excellent! Just a suggestion...


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