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These were taken a while ago but I though I'd see what you guys thought of them. :)
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Hi mimiac.
There's this one thing I won't be able to express myself on-your pictures are missing soul. I don't know what makes me think that but I couldn't see your passion for this though the topics and background you took were good.

#1: I don't know if you intended it or not, the tree seems here all black. I can't distinguish it from other things present around.
#2: the sky was pretty and the rays were also presented. Maybe that's why its looking good.

Okay, so you had pretty good angles and concepts in mind but somehow I din't like it much. It gave me an Iraq kind of feeling. Which is this place, by the way?
Sorry for being harsh but I just couldn't stop myself from typing th e soulless version. This can be improved.

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Nah that's okay. :) It's what I posted it for anyway, for a review. :) It's Malta, and the first and last pictures were taken from the bastions of our capital city. No, it's not Iraq. xD I was trying to experiment with angles and saturation basically.
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I'll start with the third one because I like it the best. I love this picture, but I find myself trying to make out the markings (they are words . . . right). I think maybe if you focused a word it would look better. But, I still think it is really good.

I don't like the second one at all. The first things I noticed were that the camera was slightly tilted, and the heads at the bottom of the picture. I also noticed a purple circle at the bottom center. The clouds would be great, but the buildings make me unfocused. Wish I could have helped more

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Wow these are great! I LOVE the third one, I love how you made the word Jacque S stand out. And the second one is great too. The rays from the sun are like rainbow! It's so cool! And the sign is backwards, which is different, and that's what makes me like it. I appreciate unique stuff. So anyway I really enjoyed these.

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Hey minimac!

These were good, but for some reason I couldn't really connect with the first two. They aren't bad pictures, but I just didn't feel drawn to them as much as I did with the third.

First Picture: There's a little too much 'dead space' in the picture, and your horizon line is a little crooked. Try cropping and rotating to get the full effect. I like the clouds in the sky and the tall building in the background. It almost reminds me of a castle.

Second Picture: It seems too dark, with the sun being that bright. The brightness distracts from the photo itself, I think. And again, your horizon line is crooked.

Third Picture: I really did like this one. The angle is amazing, and so is the focus clarity. There isn't much else I can say for it because there really isn't much else to critique. The third picture is by far the best of the bunch.

I hope to see more from you in the future! Hope I managed to help a bit!

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Hey these are good...but empty....I really don't know how to explain but they are good
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The third one was my favorite. The angle was what did it for me, and the color palette. The second might be a runner up, maybe not. The first was kind of.... meh. Maybe if you focused in more on one part or thing, it would be better. Just a thought, though, I'm no pro.
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