-The hair! So light and airy. Beautiful. I love your strokes! So smooth... -Shading on the side of her face. -When I compare a photo to your sketch, their lips are exactly the same! -The shape of the eyes. -The head shape is basically right, except...
Things I Didn't Like/Things You Didn't Do Well On:
-Goodness, the face is much too wide. Yikes. Same with neck! If you made her face and neck thinner, the sketch would be so much better. -Eyes are too high on the head, and to close to the center of her face. -I like the nose shape, but boy, is it huge. Too big! -I liked the shape of the eyes, but I would make them a bit longer, or thinner.
Hope I helped. Keep on writing/drawing- KD
P.S. PLEASE RE-SIZE!
Last edited by Kaedee on Mon Mar 22, 2010 1:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
Oh, wow, a review already. I'm not even done uploading! But that's fine.
Thanks for the pointers. This was just something I did in class one day, but still - I'll keep those in mind.
I've tried resizing. It didn't work... I don't know why, either. It doesn't help that I can't figure out how to sync the scanner to this computer. I'm stuck using a camera... ugh.
But anyway, thanks for the review!
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I'm not even done uploading! 
