My main character drawing...Maya

Hi guys...this picture was made after a few weeks of not drawing so i intend to draw again...

What do you think guys...this is my main character...(its a girl, just to wonder)...

I like it, it's just that it doesn't look like she's wearing a shirt, just the sleeves. Weird. I also think her eyes look funny, but I can't figure out what's wrong with them...

Hope I helped! Keep at it!

~Durrance

Hey! Cool drawing.

I hope you don't mind if I write a few pointers, though.
The eyes do look a little weird to me. Mainly, it's because the white part of the eye is completely visible and when it's like that it kind of makes the person look paranoid. Try to draw the eyelids a little more closed. Also, to make it more detailed, include pupils, irises and light reflected on the eyes.

That's just the thing I noticed. The lips need some work and to make your drawings stand out you could shade them.

Overall, its a pretty good drawing. The face is proportionate for a cartoon and everything's where it should.
I hope I helped and that I didn't sound harsh or anything.
Keep drawing. ^^

I like it, I just think it might be a little--not better, but...more detailed, I guess that's the right word--if some things were shaded. Like the pupils, necklace, headband, etc. could be darker. It's a pretty good drawing, though. Great job .

Hey Fox,

I like it! I'm not a big fan of this kind of drawing style – it's a bit manga-ish, no? – but this picture looks nice. I don't know if it's because of the fact you haven't coloured the pupils, but she looks rather shocked... or maybe it was the intention? I'd also like to see more details in the mouth, right now the line of the lip mostly reminds me of the way children draw birds, heh.

Overall, it's a very decent picture. I want colours, though!


Demeter
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Nice job! ...There was just a few things that didn't work out. The ears are small and so is the nose. Don't be afraid to expirement with different sizes of things. It's always good to lightly mark your penciled lines when drawing so if you need to erase, it comes right off what you don't want to be there anymore. I like it, though she does look a bit shocked. If she was meant to be, then ok. :] the hair is cool. Oh, and a tip ^.6
When you draw always lean right over your paper because, I even do it some times, if your drawing at an angle, your drawing appears slanted. Your drawing looks a bit slanted. IT IS STILL very good. Shading was great, too! You are talented. Keep on drawing!
~Skyy.