Love Story

I drew this about a year ago.
It brings back a lot of memories.
It's in the window of my mind all the time...this picture.

Hey, I'm not one for critiquing art, but I do love looking at it and trying to make it some. But, I'd have to say I erally think this is a good drawing. Side profiles always frustrate me to no end! I can never get the nose just right, so I spent lots of time looking at yours. Nicely done! I really like the guy! He's very delicious looking And the girl looks so emure and loving, man, it's very good. So like I said, I can't really say what you need to improve per say, but I've seen a lot of art, and this is definitely a good piece.
*Oh! And another reason I really like it is because although the boy has an anime-ish feel, it's still real looking, if you know what I mean. Like, it looks realistic..not a cartoon:)

I love it! You got their hair perfect. The colors are great. I really like the look in the girl's eyes and how she looks up to him. Her face is tilted nice but there is something a little weird with her nose. It's cute though! Great job.

Hey there! Lovely picture, though I would suggest resizing your images so they're easier for people to view.

When looking at this I can't help but think the words in the centre of the picture ruin it slightly, it directs my eye on that instead of the two characters you have drawn. However, I do love the detail put into the picture and how you worked on drawing every criss cross of the characters' hair. What would improve this picture would probably be a softer/more emotion coming from the guy, as he seems to be looking a little cold at the moment; his eye is also angled at a bit of a slant that makes his eyes look slightly annoyed and seeing as his expression is fairly serene--I am drawn to this instead.

Overall, this is a very good drawing and I don't think there's much else I can say, well done!

Keep on drawing and feel free to PM if you have any questions or want to me to review any more of your work.

-Onyx

I have a hard time drawing faces, so when i saw this i just had to comment. I think you did great on getting the emotion over to the viewer, on both sides. The words, though, in the middle... eek. I would try to keep the same theme going on throughout the whole piece, or have a melody going such as a collage of the word "love" written all over in different fonts and one larger and better focused, as your background. Just my idea of art! Thanks for having this on here, i can learn from what you've drawn here.

My only complaint is the size, is there any way you can resize your drawings? I've noticed that quite a few of them are very large and so it is hard for us to see the whole picture. I think this would be helpful.

This is beautiful, you've captured the structure of the human face beautifully and i know that i can't draw faces from the side so well done!!! this is really good. I do have to agree that the writing ruins it but it is a very beautiful picture.

You're a good drawer.

Woah, you're really talented!

Only afew comments.

1) He's absolutely gorgeous, you've captured him really well.
2) The guy seems prettier than the girl. His lips seem a lot more girly than hers.
3) The writing in the background seems to take away from the picture, although it's nice, the colours don't work all that well together, and the fonts and diffenences between it all distract the viewer from the real talent in the picture.

Great Job, you have a gift!

Keep writing... err, drawing!

~Mo.

i thoroughly enjoyed this. not only are the faces appealing, but the colors and writing really liven up what could've been a dull sketch. nicely done, very creative