Another of Sesshomaru

I know the lines will ruin this, and it's not that I'm not taking ya'lls advise. I just drew this a long time ago.

not completely. try transfuring it onto nonlined paper and shade it some more. or color it, whichever you prefer.
the line structure is great, but it gets little confusing in the backround. try shading it first then color it.
other than that great work!
~Livi J.

I don't know if I could transfer it, I am good at drawing it once, but I don't know about twice. I can try later, and as hard as I try i don't know how to shade. I need lesons bad haha. I guess I will try till I get it right.

to be honest, flower child...i like the last drawing of sesshoumarou. In this one, the face is a bit deformed and the nose is too pointy...

mostly for me, i used a simple line as a nose maybe that looks like this (/). I did that before and after a few bad commenst, i used the slash and it worked well.

foxfire wrote:to be honest, flower child...i like the last drawing of sesshoumarou. In this one, the face is a bit deformed and the nose is too pointy...

mostly for me, i used a simple line as a nose maybe that looks like this (/). I did that before and after a few bad comments, i used the slash and it worked well.

I agree whole heartedly. In addition your lines are too clean. It feels so artificial? The hair is messed up too. The nose is not pointy its just too big. The eyes don't really have an anime feel to them. In addition his eyebrows aren't that thick (think female). His tattoos on his cheek curves downwards. Yours is on a plane, sort of. His ears aren't paper thin. There needs to be shadow or another line to show depth. In addition his lower chin is messed up. Your drew the curve going out but its actually going in. In addition his jawline is more curved. Remember he does have more feminine look...

I used the picture below as a guideline.

Keep practicing its the only way to get better.

Might I suggest learning to cross hatch so you could make it feel less empty.

^^

Thanks for the reviews. I agree with all of them, i think haha I need to go back and look again. I drew this like two years ago in my free time. Oh and the wind is blowing in the picture....and what do yu mean by the tattoos are pointing down???

Wow!
Really nice!! All-be-it not as good as the original, but still really good!
I also have an idea for you:
You said you weren't that good at original drawings, well why don't you try illustrating for some of the stories on here? It'd be good practice!
Mar sin leat!
LordLoredaen

The picture above wasn't the original picture I looked at, and the thing is I have to look at the picture to draw it. So when it comes to ideas I have many, but putting them on paper the way I want to is really hard.

Hey there I'm back and with another review.

Okay so first things first, I do prefer the first one but this one is pretty good cause it gives more of an angle and some shoulder in it. That's pretty good.

Things to fix:

The one eyes eyebrow is normal while the other is arched. The face is too flat going down. Give it a curve.

His head is shaped strangely making him look almost alienated. Look at your parents or a sibling and draw the head in that shape. That way it will look pretty realistic.

Another thing is hair, as I have said before, explodes off the head in anime. Make it taller on top and really ecentuate the lines in it.

Unlike the others, I like the artifical feel to shessomaru because it is anime and reminds me of the original stuff like sailor moon and pokemon where lines are too straight.

His neck needs to connect to the ear a little better, while the ear is also to small. Make the ear bigger and the neck may connect better.

His shirt looks very artificial in a non-good way. Fix that up and you'll be good as gold.

Thats all for today

~The.Dreamwalker

Thanks for the review! I do agree with what you said except with the hair, that is just the way it is in the show, go watch it and they all have long hair, it sticks up a little on top but thats it. (review my sasuke picture please)

i like this one but yeah the nose is pointy you did a good job keep up the good work!

the nose needs to be flatter and you could just use gimp which works like photoshop but is free to edit the picture so you could get rid fo the lines and make it whiter
the eyes seem alittle off shading isnt really hard its all about how much pressure you are putting on the pencil or if it is pen you could use cross hatching

wow this is pretty damn awesome
so your good at poems, writing and art?

good job