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Toddler-Wolf-Thing



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Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:41 pm
Katemabob says...



This is a picture of a little wolf that I drew. This one was drawn on the computer, too. There is no tracing, a lot of smudging . . . Sorry about the writing at the bottom - I needed something to put at the bottom so there would not be a giant space. I think it is supposed to be a toddler-wolf thing, because it looks so young. I had some trouble with the eyes, so if you have any suggestions on how I can fox them up, that would be great! Also, I know that there are not a lot of big-headed brown wolves that look like this, but I wanted to add to the cuteness. and I thought that I wanted more colours than just grey. So . . . Yeah. I hope you like it!
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Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:15 pm
MyMistyWish says...



you did a good job on the baby wolf but with the eyes you could try to make them bigger so it gives you more of a baby look
  





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Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:58 pm
MeadowLark says...



Heya! This little wolf is cute! You succeeded in that part.

His eyes are way to small though. You could do well in making them larger. The browness is unique but it reminds me of a mouse. Sorry.

His left ear is also bigger and rounder than the other one. But good job on this!

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Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:23 am
Katemabob says...



Kay thanks for the awesome comments and constructive criticism guys!
Here is a 'fixed' version. I did this in - like - one minute so it is not that great... anywys...
So ya here it is.

Sorry if it scares you... It kind of scares me... I should fix the eyes again later...

H O P E Y O U L I K E I T ! ! ! !

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Wolves are awesome. :D
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Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:46 am
MeadowLark says...



Aww! Okay, this one is just plain adorable! Just look at those big innocent, puppy dog eyes! He's soooo cute!

He does look slightly crosseyed but this is looks way better (I hope that sounded right). I love this! Gold Star! Good Job!

Meadow
Purple light in the canyon
that is where I long to be
With my three good companions
just my rifle, pony and me

--- "My Rifle My Pony and Me"
  





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Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:13 pm
Katemabob says...



THANK YOU!!! :D Ha.
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