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You can fall from the sky,
you can fall from a tree,
but the best way to fall,
[i]is in love with me

I love it! You should put this in poetry, though.

Interesting. I feel I've seen this before though. I'd be careful with not coming so close to a familiar quote.
Be careful with that. If you did not mean it, you did a lovely job but still it may come from something in your memory.

Kamas

This would make an awesome end to a poem. I'd love to see what you could come up with in a poem based on this theme.

Oh, very interesting. Nice job and yes, it did sound like something I've heard/read before. Be weary of that. But if you haven't heard/read anything like this before then nice job. You are very good with poetry and quotes.

-Rena

Kamas wrote:Interesting. I feel I've seen this before though. I'd be careful with not coming so close to a familiar quote.
Be careful with that. If you did not mean it, you did a lovely job but still it may come from something in your memory.

Kamas

I agree, I have seen this before. Or heard it or something. Plagiarism is very bad, even unintentional plagiarism.

With a few more exclamation marks this would be totally symbolic of angst ridden teenage girl poetry.