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Sad lonely Insane Girl (me) talking



Should I do a sequel?

no you need theripy
4
24%
yes but you need theripy
9
53%
yes
1
6%
No
3
18%
 
Total votes : 17


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Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:04 pm
kaolin says...



as the others have sead it is a little weard...but it's as funny as he(dubble hocky sticks)


... ( LL )


>i dont get it.
>me nither.
>what the hell are you doing here?
>shut up...
  





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Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:10 am
Raaayna808 says...



Hahaha!!!
I busted up laughing because of how sad this one girl is.
<zelithon> I WONDER WHY NO ONE ELSE BUT US GO ON HERE? <-------- LMFAO!!! i COULD NOT stop laughing! :D
  





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Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:31 am
AdventurerDaniel says...



I liked this if you made it more coherent it would make an amusing monologue please read mine and comment that would make me happy but that's aside from the point. I think if actually written in to a monologue format with a more direct story line it would be performance worthy.
So much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens.
Red Wheel Barrow by- William Carlos Williams
  








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