Young Writers Society

Oh my goodness, June, I love this. I noticed only a few grammar errors, like only two. But it's funny. Hahahahahahaha. I loved it, you really earned a gold star.

Character: No, nothing's wrong. Everything is right here. So, since you can't find what makes you a good author you're not really a good one, so--

After author, there should be a comma because it's a complex sentence.

Character: (sighs; to self) Didn't I say 'e wasn't a bright crayon. . .

I don't like the apostrophe and then an 'e' for he because it doesn't fit the character, the way he speaks wasn't like that in other places. It just doesn't fit.

That's it. It was brilliant. But I would add more actions though, but it was prefect. *Loves story and runs to give a gold star*

I'd rate it five stars out of five. Great idea and easily relatable!

Hahahahahaha!!!! *falls off chair in a fit of uncontrollable laughter*
Oh my gods, mate, that was bloomin' hilarious!!!

You know, it's kinda funny, I do something like that with my characters. I will "interview" them before I put them in my story, so that I will know my character through and through.

But seriously, mate, the is (ok, I can't resist any more) bloody brilliant!!!!!!
You should write more scripts!

Beannach leibh an-drasta!

-LordLoredaen

Lol nice.

I think I should get some help if my charaters started talking to me... but you did good job with it!

Keep up the awesome work!

-Irish