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Guardians of Time



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Tue Feb 19, 2008 11:30 pm
Maybe says...



Ian-

Unexpected? Yes. But hey, i wasn't one to complain.

I walked beside the girl who could have been no more than two years older than me. Her silver-blond hair brushed against my cheek lightly as she turned to look at me. I stood stiff and rigid under her inspection.

"What's your name?" she finally asked and began walking again.

"Ian." i responded, my eyes searching the streets before us. Then i looked behind me and frowned.

Where was Aaron?
Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.
  





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Wed Feb 20, 2008 7:52 am
sylverdawn says...



can someone please explain things to my character? Kaoli's so confused
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

novel.php?id=1157
  








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