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Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:38 pm
EmiSukotto16 says...



Laura

I thought I'd have a stroke. I didn't think Lynne would have remembered. If my blood had still been pumping, I would have blushed, but I just gave her a mock glare and began dancing. My body flowed with the music, my skin tight navy dress clung to me as I moved my hips. My golden curls bounced almost in rhythm to the music. It was a fast paced song, but I managed to keep up. Lynne was with me. We were moving together, looking choreographed as she mimicked my moves.

The song ended and we stopped, the mortal eyes were still on us and the hands were clapping. We had drawn attention before we had even noticed. We smiled sweetly and bowed as the next song came on. It was a slow song. I didn't like those very much, singles always got cheated out of the fun when those came on...
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
Llama 1:"That is what forgiveness sounds like; screaming and then silence."
  





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Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:10 pm
AyumiGosu17 says...



Lynne

(She'll kill me later...I just know it!) I grinned back at the second glare she gave me as we walked to the counter.

"Well, did I just make it better?" I laughed, asking for another shot of blood.

"Oh, yeah, while embarrassing me! You witch!" she slapped my arm playfully, making me laugh harder.

(I love this. I love getting her wound up! Now things will be interesting!)
"Neglect not the gift that is in thee, which was given thee by prophecy, with the laying on of the hands of the presbytery." Timothy 4:14 KJV
  





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Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:34 pm
piepiemann22 says...



(We need this to really go some where. Any body have any ideas?)
I will always fight back, no matter what.
  





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Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:39 pm
Alice says...



(Some really corny ones that I'd rather not share with the public)
I just lost the game.
  





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Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:41 pm
TNCowgirl says...



(No, i'm just there anyway :D)
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
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Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???
  





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Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:51 pm
AyumiGosu17 says...



((Do we have a DT?))
"Neglect not the gift that is in thee, which was given thee by prophecy, with the laying on of the hands of the presbytery." Timothy 4:14 KJV
  





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Tue Sep 18, 2007 11:01 pm
Alice says...



(Nope, I shall maketh one in a moment then)
I just lost the game.
  








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