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Wed May 09, 2007 5:59 am
Dynamo says...



Eh... sorry. I guess I'm the one to blame for the whole naruto cross-over thingy. I didn't mean for it to happen though, the others just brought in all the other ninjas after Kage's brother attacked him. And I also didn't intend for every single ninja attacking the school to have ninja powers from Naruto. So I'm not the one to take all the blame here, just thought you'd like to know.
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Wed May 09, 2007 7:42 pm
Kyuubi says...



I am so confused right now. What is going on with the ninjas and things? To me it looked like something from X-Men when the government attacks the school.
  





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Thu May 10, 2007 2:08 am
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that would be cool. Anyways, like I said earlier, I'm not blaming anyone, because i saw exactly what you mean and people were interpreating it wrong. So that's no big deal, we're cool now. Now the only thing we need to do now is get Merribelle and Coden's relationship to slow down. There all over each other and we're trying to keep this book PG. that means no nudity, or sexual activities :roll: (they need to make a guy vommiting) either way try and keep things PG, and umm keep on posting we are moving really fast
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Thu May 10, 2007 4:27 am
darchoco says...



on an important note.... i am not planning on making anything go past PG! I hate writing into the sexual references. just noting. Trust the writer.
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Thu May 10, 2007 7:06 pm
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phew! okay cuz that little scene in the infirmary where she woke up and u weren't in her arms...... anyways......... I'm not sure what's going to happen after this ninja invasion. Are we going to make them our sworn rivals? Ir we continue on, making the sports and everday life the plot of the story
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Thu May 10, 2007 9:57 pm
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O_O Woah I missed a lot. As for the anything past PG *shudders at thought*

No gracias Meribelles a little like Rhianna (to all who understand) a little (yeah right) cookoo, hugs people too much (and Im gonna eat Rhi if she hugs me one more time) and enjoys scolding (obviously)

Ok, the god mode thing is right. Ill work on Meribelles wing being....

Meribelle: OH MY GOD?!?! YOU FREAK DONT TOUCH ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Me:.....Sprained

Meribelle: *exasperated sigh*

Joking. Ill tone it down .
  





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Fri May 11, 2007 12:00 am
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Did anyone understand Layleun's post? I couldn't and I have known her for 11 years!!! anywhoo, I have to agree with Blackwings on this one. Let's all just tone it down a little. And If a kid (like the characters) were to kill someone, they would probably feel sick to their stomachs for a long, long time or have PTSS(Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome) I'm just saying this out loud for no apparent reason but I had to.
  





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Fri May 11, 2007 12:09 am
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*cough* PTSD, not PTSS. Post Traumatic Stress Disorder.

Sorry, Psych major is getting the better of me.
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Fri May 11, 2007 8:55 am
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OK, I've got everything figured out! The ninjas were hired by Coden's parents to kill the Principal so they can get to their son. How's that?
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Fri May 11, 2007 11:19 am
Ani May Queen says...



I like that idea!
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Fri May 11, 2007 3:23 pm
misspriss says...



Okay, I'm sorry, but I'm not going to be able to post on Marrissa anymore. Well, actually, it's been a long time since I posted on her anyway, but...yeah. Well, I'll be watching this storybook, and I hope it goes well!
  





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Fri May 11, 2007 10:29 pm
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AWESOME!!! I'm starting a vote. Majority wins on what the plot should be. Send me a post if you like or dislike Dynamo's idea. I myself do so that will be 1 vote as a yes, and obciooulsy dynamo does making it 2. Send me Pm's saying yes or no. But actually restate otherwise I mkae get confuzed.







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