The land of Geromara(closed)

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The new geneartion of dragon riders are here with a new start of a golden age . There are six human riders that are going throught the training in the place of the elves Ellesamera. After 2 years of the brutal and heard training they are being sent to a new land called Geromara. They are to look and map the new place that will become a land of dragon riders home.

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=200&t=95734


1-m-Kayden Gorge sunwater
2-fLaura Turner Taylorlove
3-m-Sebastian Terene Impaired
4-f- Nila Greydon SassBideAndRawr
5-m-Archer Wilds Chupatoasta
6-f-Valeria SidereaAquila
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Reserving a.....let meh see....male spot?
A soul that knows it is loved but does not love itself, betrays its sediment: What is at the bottom rises to the surface ~Friedrich Nietzsche




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Rider
gender: Male
Name:kaden gorge
Age (17-20) 18
Look:blond hair, green eyes,a body that was ment for running from thiings not fighting things ,wears a small amont of mtel armor for every day life the rest is a browie-red leather.
History:He was a out cast because he only had a mother and no father because of a bear that crushed his life. His mother was trying to do any thing to keep them both alive. When he was 16 the great egg carriers came to his village to see if any was a rider in there village. The people came on red and blue dragons. When Kaden came forward to touch a orange egg the blue dragon looked at their rider. he walk froward and took Kadens hand and said " welcome young rider" and handed him the egg " we will be back in 3 days but I will be leaving Nory here to gard you and the dragon in the egg." As the 3 days pasted the egg only rocked back and forth but did not break when the carriers did come back there was great concren from Nory. So with her teeth she gently made a small hole in the shell after that the shell broke into meany bits. A small orange baby dragon was laying there looking at Karen with yellow eyes Karen reached out to touch it and as he made contact there was a burning feeling in his hand.


Dragon
Name:Gorik
gender:male
look: orange scales, lean body build, yellow eyes,short spiks up and down his spin.
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Gender: Male
Name: Sebastian Terene
Age: 19
Look: Dark black hair, slightly wavy, tends to get in his eyes, dark caramelly skin, built almost like a bird, tall, slender, with a pianist's hands and quick feet.
History: He had a decent past, a mother, a father, a sister, as a child he was oblivious to the rest of the world but fascinated by the sky. His days as a toddler were spent either cloud watching or working on simple household chores. As he got older he wasn't permitted the time he used to have to dream and wonder and philosophize, he got his schooling, and found himself among friends. A gang. It was from then at the age of 14 his life when downhill, he got caught up in the low rank scandals and petty robberies, he set fires and loosed farm animals. A year later he met the Carriers, and upon curiosity of the flying beasts, the giant creatures that glided through the clouds and the sky. He snuck in with the other kids, each a year older and lied about his age for the opportunity to see the eggs. He never intended to receive one of his own. But he did, a large scarlet dragon and growled and urged him forward towards the collection of multi colored eggs. He reached out a hand and chose at random, finding his fingertips pressed against a black shell. It froze to the point it burned but he was mesmerized, one rider came forth, and offered the heavy egg to him, wrapped in cloth. The same rider who gave him the egg was chosen to stay with him along with the rider's dragon. The egg hatched almost immediately after bringing home to show to his family. Pieces flew everywhere, but sitting in the rubble shaking its nose after an explosive sneeze was his dragon. A beautiful ebony Zmaj.

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Name: Vespera
Gender: Female
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A soul that knows it is loved but does not love itself, betrays its sediment: What is at the bottom rises to the surface ~Friedrich Nietzsche




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Rider
gender- Female
Name- Laura Turner
Age- 17
Look- Laura has light red hair that is really wavy. She had very pale skin and she had freckles on her nose and her cheeks. She is about 5’5 and she is very thin.
History- She grew up with her mother, father and her brother. She was what you would classify as a ‘good’ child. She is sweet, kind and selfless. She was always a sweet heart. She grew up with a loving family and great friends. Three years ago, Laura and her brother were walk in the village. Some of the carriers were in the village on a search for Riders. Her brother was dying to see. So she went along. That day she got her egg. Her brother was jealous and she was excited. Only a day later, her dragon was born. Over the years, the beautiful white dragon and Laura became very attached to each other. Radek, the dragon, quickly became protective over Laura.

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Name- Radek
gender- Male
look- He is white as snow, but he has grey specks around the face. He is very muscular and he has black eyes.
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Rider

Gender: Female
Name: Nila Greydon
Age: 17 years old
Look: Nila is around 5ft 3” inches in height with a lean, vaguely athletic build and oddly pale skin. She has a mass of black hair that falls just past her shoulders in soft waves. Her eyes are an intense shade of blue with flecks of violet around the centre and surrounded by thick black lashes. She has a long scar running down her left arm and a small, heart shaped birthmark on her right hand.
History: Nila grew up with her father and younger brother Tomas as they travelled between towns, selling goods and never staying in one place for more than a couple of weeks.
She never knew much about her mother except that she disappeared a few months after Nila was born (Tomas has a different mother) and that she never came back. Nila never went to a proper school (as they never stayed in one town long enough for her to enrol) and was home-schooled in a way- learning everything that she knows of her father and her step-mother (before she passed away after having Tomas). She was always close to her family but she knew that- with the lack of sales that was going on- her father couldn’t support them all for much longer. When she was 15 years old she ran away, trying to find a better job so that she could help her family.
One night when she was out walking through the woods she tripped over what looked like a large silver stone and thought that it might be worth some money in the closest village. When she first picked it up though she knew that no matter what happened she could never bare to part with it.
Unfortunately this was after she was seen carrying it a way by a bunch of hunters who knew that the stone was actually an egg. They chased her and in trying to run away she accidentally crashed off the edge of a bridge, with the dragon egg still in her arms.
A few days later the egg hatched and Nila found herself caring for a tiny silver dragon with the bluest eyes that she had ever seen. She also knew that in the area of the country that she was in at that moment dragons were banished creatures but she could not stand to part with her dragon so she snuck out of the border and begin to search for other riders hoping that they could help her.

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Name: Elidal
Gender: Female
Look: Elidal has a strong lean build with sleek wings and perfectly formed, snowy white claws. Her scales are a shimmering silver colour with the odd blue mixed among them and she has the bluest eyes imaginable with silver shards slicing through them.
She a relitively small dragon but with more power in her conpact form then most people would guess.
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Gender: Female
Name: Valeria
Age: 18
Look: Valeria is a little taller than average, with a strong, athletic build. She has pale skin, and her eyes are an odd amber color. Her hair is dark brown, very curly (almost frizzy), and she usually keeps it tied back, out of her face. She typically wears a dark red tunic with the sleeves rolled up, matching loose pants, knee-high boots, a leather vest, and arm guards.
History: Valeria was the only child of two craftsmen. Her father was a metalworker and her mother was a woodworker. They lived in a small house behind their shop, which sold everything from swords and bows to dishes and jewelry. Valeria was trained to make things, but she didn't want to stay in her hometown. She had a friend, Larch, whom she was afraid her parents would make her marry. (She loved him dearly, but couldn't imagine marrying him--he was far too annoying.) She and Larch always joked about becoming dragon riders and traveling the world. When the carriers came to her town, Larch suggested that they go see them, thinking it would be a good laugh. Naturally, it was a surprise to Valeria when she was given one of the eggs. It hatched shortly afterward, and as soon as the dragon was big enough to carry her, they left home, and haven't returned since.


Dragon

Name: Aquila
Gender: Female
Look: Aquila is on the slender side, with long legs and large wings. Her scales are a metallic dark gray color, pointed at the tips, and she has ivory horns just above her ears, sweeping back from her head. Her eyes are dark purple, laced with strand of lavender. She's small, but she's a quick and nimble flyer.
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Are you starting us off?
A soul that knows it is loved but does not love itself, betrays its sediment: What is at the bottom rises to the surface ~Friedrich Nietzsche




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YAY! This is going to be a lot of fun!
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Kaden

I was walking back to my house that the elves have given me to live in well I
was there training with 1 other person . Gorik came down from the sky like a shooting rocket and just before hitting the ground he opened his wings. But still when he landed the earth trembled under his feet because of his size and power. "So how was learning the langage of the elves?"
"As fun as last time; boring I dont really care about learning about the langage for I don't like using it at all."
" But what would you do if you where tied up and the only thing to get away was to use magic"
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Laura

Radek walks right beside me the whole time. He is so alert and he looks like he is ready for anything. He is so protective over me. It is almost like he is my older brother, or a father.

I look over to a boy that I have not met yet. "Hi, I'm Laura." I say, smiling.

He looks over to me. "Kaden." He says. I smile. Radek huffs and puff, watching us.
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Sebastian jogged to catch up with Kaden, one of his better yet less studious friends, "Mellyon!" He called out in the elvish word for friend the same way one would call out amigo in Spanish. Vespera was close behind him in the air, and when he stopped she settled down on the ground at his side with a rustle of her wings. She was spunky and often unpredictable, but extremely loyal. With a nod the Zmaj greeted Gorik.
"Don't tell me you're going to miss the races Kaden." Sevastian joked, his accent was heavy with rolling r's and words that ran together like water. It was all too evident he was from the southern deserts, all the way from his raven black hair to his darkly tanned skin.
"That would be a shame wouldn't it." Vespera mused, cocking her head to the side playfully.
Sebastian looked over at the girl who had approached and his eyes ran over her shamelessly before shrugging and falling quiet.varound his friends he was funny and infamous for his childish demeanor, but around strangers he became surly and displaced.
A soul that knows it is loved but does not love itself, betrays its sediment: What is at the bottom rises to the surface ~Friedrich Nietzsche




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Nila

The wind rushes past my face in a quick sweeping motion and Elidal’s speed picks up, sweeping us in a graceful sideways motion so that we end up spinning through the sky.

A laugh bubbles out of my throat and is instantly echoed by her own- rumbling like a warm breeze through my head- as we rush forward, against the wind.
Who’d have known that the baby dragon that’d been my charge little over a month ago could be so graceful in the sky? Who’d have known that I can even fly her?

I always knew…

I smile, “Of Course YOU did. I meant the villages. The ones that knew… They all thought that you were more trouble then you were worth.”

I’m glad you didn’t share their opinion.

Then I spot the small group on the ground surrounded by dragons. THEIR dragons.
Other riders? The elves that I’d met just outside the city assured me that there would be other Riders in here but up until now I hadn’t known for sure until now.
I had hoped but…

Instantly Elidal is swooping downwards, in one graceful motion, heading towards the Riders on the ground and landing only a few seconds later, around 10 metres away from the group.

I jump off Elidal’s back, heading cautiously for the group, all of a sudden feeling way more self-conscious then I probably should, thinking of all the terrible things that I could say in the next 20 seconds.

You’ll be fine, Nila.
Nodding I step forward, pushing a smile onto my face that somehow feels easy. I’ve finally found other people like me…

“Hi,” I say a little quietly, approaching them, “I’m Nila.”




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Well I was thing about what to say another rider landed and came into are little circle. She introduced her shelf as Nila I put my hand out "I'm Kaden and welcome."
"Um" I look at Nila and Laura " Can you two please come with me to see the Queen Lefona" then I look at Sebastian " sorry I can't I'm taking this two to the queen she was expecting them but ill catch up later ok."
I turn around and start walking to the great hall that was made of 4 very large tree roots. "So tell me about yourself I came from Rifton and i have been here for 2 years learning."



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