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Thu Feb 07, 2008 10:18 pm
lakegirls says...



Hi,
Very well done. It was short and sweet. It's nice once in a while to read stories like this. There is not much else I can say. I thought he was going to go back into the party after she kissed him.

Why did she just come out and kiss him? Was it for pity?

My favorite line had to be:

The countdown started. The couples were getting excited. I hated them for it. I needed another drink.


It was funny.

-lg*
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