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Crippled and Crawling



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Tue Apr 01, 2014 1:59 pm
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0. Smelling of onions and yelling at children and drifting to sleep with my hand in my mouth.
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1. cloudy lemonade

brown bottle flies trapped in a jar
whisking up wind . thick as desert jam

jam jars line my wall from
old bruise to blueberry lip to wrist vein
to fading cigarette burn mark pink

walls and walls of jars and broken leg parts,
eyes in sockets and sockets stuffed.

sinuses draining into jars emptied of water
the circle of life and the square of four small walls.
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1.1

Immense

A product of builders. I stand
in the middle of a four-lane highway
and feel abandoned and rooted and long.

We all become machine operators
when we turn sixteen -- we are all skilled,
we are all laboring.

I ask you to be brave and focused and wise
and thoughtful and immense and weak
only because I forget -- we are all skilled,
we are all laboring; we feel abandoned and rooted and lost.
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1.2 Chuck

My grandfather lay on a bed with his cheeks shaved smooth.
He looked strange, like they had taken the real one and
shown me the sick one, expecting me to not know the difference.

The walls all seem like brick. The sheets all seem like white.

My mother cried when I wasn't there. We never
lay on the couch together and cried like I did with Dad
when someone I never even knew passed on. Dad cried
for his dad but I had never said grandfather for him.

My grandfather lay on a bed with his respirator pulled out,
ice chips in a paper cup in his hand, promising to fish with me
in the lake at the bottom of the hill again.

My grandfather lay on a bed with doctors that all seemed like fish,
gaping as he lifted out of the water and where their fins don't reach,
and his cheeks became gills and he stopped breathing:
respirators not scuba divers.

The sun dried his face golden and all that was left
by the time the phone call was over was a puddle of saltwater
on the counter, stinging the bottoms of my arms.
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Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:13 pm
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8.1 Shadowed

dance dreams .. curly brown hair silhouette
fair ground lights around and up and around and down //
a rock in the middle of a great pond
and you upon it.. . curly brown hair

silhouette

dreams dance .. ferris wheel comes back around and around
you are in my nights years later // yellow 5am bird sounds
water spirals down the drain
empty streets.
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8.2 bag of nuts

a bag of nuts and wrinkles
hard to open .. too many faces i don't know
pressing against the window
and saying eat me eat me.

fleeting acknowledgements lay at my feet like feathers //
futures i don't want. i wipe the table clean.
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8.3 interference

inter
fer



it's not


it's gray. it's grains of sky sliding down a chute
and stacking up and crushing .. sliding
down the side of the pile
to flat and dull / to cut.



ring . click . ring . click. ring ring. click click click
fan whirring on and on
fan whirring / fill the room
dark from one wall to the next
the out wall to the door
dark up to the ceiling
and the fan.

click.



rence
rence
once
twice
thrice
rence
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8.4 loosing grasp




i am first naked
with muscles moving shallow under bones
breasts sagged into slopes
and i put on soft layer after soft layer
until i am weighted to the floor
and they crown me.
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8.5 rim of the sky

the sky is expansive.
write another poem. // say something wiser.

the sky is expansive and reaches on forever,
but its rim is the horizon
and horizon is land
and we are at the finger tips of the sky
in every moment we wake and walk.
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8.6 play

infant
ignorant
indignant

muscat
mustache
stomachache

erase the words // write in new words
studying brings more words
only words
words and no speech .. erase the wall
drawn on the white board in red pen/
hands messy from the marker crumbs

i am giving up.
i am up and giving.
giving i am up.

go
grow
growl
growled
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Your work over the years I've read it has a surprising consistency throughout— somehow you manage to make what appears to be disconnected images and pull them together into something far more beautiful than the sum of its parts.

Your poetry seems to reflect life— chaotic but all important parts of the whole.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  





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Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:08 am
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9 hermitage

unmade bed . browned pillows /
turn once they are still brown **

recipe towards apathy
let whatever you have fall in the bowl .
imitate again . imitate again / again //

howl winds at the window floor to ceiling
and i will just pull the blinds / boil water
and the tea kettle drowns out the outside
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Thu Apr 17, 2014 4:23 pm
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Deanie says...



Your poetry is so unique and different! The type of poetry that stops and makes me think :) And that's the kind of poetry I treasure most <3
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