My Pencil

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I know how you feel with this. Pencils get lost so frequently...anyway, I enjoyed reading this. The only thing would be that the second stanza has sort of a different flow to it than the others, I think...it seems a little different, but if you like it then keep it. Keep writing!
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hahaha so cute. I understand the feeling. When I write I excape my pain and can go anywhere. I hate when my pencil runs away. I can't think anything to say to help except, keep writing. ;)




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This is cute. I loved it. Pencils run away from me too. It almost seems like I repel pencils. It's great to read a poem that isn't sad or depressing. Anyway, great poem and keep up the good work. :D
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this is a really unique poem because usually all the poems i read are all serious and intense. but this was really light hearted and i loved it. it was so cute and i also loved the rhyming.



It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien