I just kinda wanted to people to read this..... I just came up with this in English class today and i thought it was pretty good(and cute!) for coming up with it in 3 minutes, it's a new record!!! It's an acrosstic poem that spells love! I hope you like it. -plus i haven't posted anything in like 5 million years...
Letting yourself fall head Over heels for a Very special boy who means Everything to you
BE YOURSELF. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
Two things are infinite: human stupidity and the universe; and I'm not sure about the universe
Don't tell me that the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon
I like this one. It is short and sweet and it flows (double points for that one ), which many people have trouble with when dealing with acrostics. I also like how the sentence is not too long, but gives enough info. I do acrostics too, if you want to take a look at them .
Very nice!
"If you ever have a problem don't say 'Hey God I have a big problem.' Rather 'Hey Problem... I have a big God and it's all going to be okay."
I think everything that was to be said about this poem was said by shiney1. Excellent work! I haven't reviewed any other work you may have posted here because I am a new member, but I can tell just by this how great of a poet you are. Keep writing! -Alex
It is very cute! Sounds like something I would do....ahh, young love! A great source of inspiration for us writers! <3 I'm sure that "very special boy" would love ur poem.
I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
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