You know that you're crazy when

You know that you're crazy when
you place your hand on the wall
thinking that if you concetrate hard enough
you will be able to pass through it

You think that the wind blowing through your hair
sounds like a symphony
and tears come to your eyes
when you think that the stars speak to you

Oh angels
Angels of music, beauty, love
ANGEL OF INSPIRATION STRIKE ME
Curses to the world

Electric pulses flow from your eyes
Operas haunt you everywhere
And suddenly your enemy looks beautiful

Humaniod minds that we posses
ravage the world, destroying everything in its path
Distant worlds join as one
Traveling across eternity for peace

"Make love, not war"
"Reality is merely an illusion"
Oh it kills me

does anyone care to comment?

I really liked this, but there are some spelling errors.

"concetrat" should be "concentrate"
"INSIRATION" should be "INSPIRATION"
'humaniod" should be "humaniod"

Overall, I liked it. Keep it up! :thumb:

It's good. Expressive and forceful.

No real formatting involved here so it was difficult to read as a poem...

It was too disjointed and there was no real flow to the piece, just a bunch of random thoughts squashed together and it was hard to decipher. For the record, using "oh" doesn't really do anything.

I agree on the formatting... needs some spacing between thoughts. But I liked it, so good job!

I think the OH ANGEL OF INSPIRATION STRIKE ME should be lower case with an exclamation point, but it isn't a big thing, at least to me. And I like it. It reminded me of some of the things I've written...the vague philosophic messages, the style of...I don't know. But I like it.

I guess I am crazy then.