My lips are chapped! (don't do titles!)

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thegirlwhofateloves
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Mon Oct 17, 2005 2:25 pm
thegirlwhofateloves says... · Mon Oct 17, 2005 2:25 pm
Chapped lips
Chalk dreams
Tiny capsuals
Are my relief
If you know what I mean
Pick a star
Swallow that pill
And fall to the floor
Hide your heart
Kill your soul
Destroy that world
Made by yourself



Hmmphf...not sure on the last line...
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Mon Oct 17, 2005 11:58 pm
Muse says... · Mon Oct 17, 2005 11:58 pm
Uh...seemed a bit muddled. The message isn't very clear..I'm not quite sure what it's meant to mean. I like the short, snappy lines though. Fun to read XD.
"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."
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Nefer
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Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:43 am
Nefer says... · Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:43 am
I'm not too sure if this poem is about suicide? Is it?

It wasn't too bad a poem. :D
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thegirlwhofateloves
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:14 pm
thegirlwhofateloves says... · Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:14 pm
It's about stupid behaviour that I experience because I'm an idiot. It's about my self destruction...if that doesn't sound too pretentious!
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