Hard Breakup

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spy0h
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Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:53 am
spy0h says... · Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:53 am
katchaerin wrote:Wow. I certainly like this poem. :)

Trying to make it rhyme didn't make this poem sound odd.

This is good. :)

Keep writing. Congratulations, by the way, for making this work featured. XD

-KAT <3

Hey Kat,
Thanks a lot :) ^^
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Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:21 pm
RedRaven says... · Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:21 pm
Wow. I really liked this!

I'm no expert on poetry or anything, but your poem was really good.

My favourite aspect of your poem was how it was written in conversation. It kinda remiended me of "Love The Way You Lie" by Eminem. :D

Good work!
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Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:48 pm
spy0h says... · Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:48 pm
RedRaven wrote:Wow. I really liked this!

I'm no expert on poetry or anything, but your poem was really good.

My favourite aspect of your poem was how it was written in conversation. It kinda remiended me of "Love The Way You Lie" by Eminem. :D

Good work!

Thanks Red :)
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Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:39 pm
Sionarama says... · Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:39 pm
WOW!! This is a very beautiful, realistic, rhyming poem!! I love the lines, though some of them didnt rhyme that well. Nice thoughts and conversation. You made it so that I got the rhyme AND the conversation, but it didnt feel too conversational or rhym-y. GREAT JOB!!! :D Yah, great job for getting it feautered!
As Always,
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Im not your daughter! ;)
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Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:41 pm
Sionarama says... · Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:41 pm
You mean Wife! (JK!!!)
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For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle