People of the Earth 14/05/09

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People of the Earth

The Earth shudders.
As it moves.
Disaster affects others.
But we all lose.

People of the Earth.
Listen to these words.
These words have their worth.
Imagine soaring with the birds.

The Earth lives and breathes.
The flowers and the trees.
The animals walk with ease.
But everything comes and leaves.

Everything has a cause.
The Earth just turns another page in history.
The world continues to spin, never to pause.
Everything has it's story.

People of the Earth.
Listen to these words.
These words have their worth.
Imagine soaring with the birds.
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hey this poem is really good
Not too long not too short =)
I wrote your name in the sand and the sea washed it away! I wrote your name in my heart and there it will stay.




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I like the meaning behind this poem. How life goes on. its well written too, how its not confusing at what your trying to say.:)
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Good poem Snoopysoap. I couldn't find any errors. I liked it.
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defendthelegend wrote:hey this poem is really good
Not too long not too short =)


I agree! Its not to long to be bored and not to short for senseless ideas. Its just perfect.

A message for the people of the earth is your poem all about. *obvious* You're telling that be ready for the EARTH will come to an end and no one can stop that END! Time will come and the EARTH will die, time will come that it will revive. :D :( :D :(
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