In the Eyes of an Abuser

I walk waiting for my chance to spring, to attack

The yellow school bus pulls up to the stop

My mind becomes frantic with images of what is about to transpire

My need becoming an urgent demand

She steps off

The little girl, with a red bow in her blonde hair

Her red dress made to look like little riding hood

I let my feet carry me towards her as she takes the path through the woods to her house

Little Red Riding Hood indeed, Me the Big Bad Wolf

I let my eyes roam taking in the tender white-flesh of her legs in her white panty hose

She's singing a song from The Little Mermaid

Her voice setting my blood on fire

I pounce

Never giving her time to scream

I smile as she lays there trying to make her small, tiny fists cause me harm

I let her feel me by sitting on her right where I need her the most

She cries out and bites me, afraid of my hardness

I see her tears dropping from the corners of her eyes

Dropping down to the dirt floor beneath her

Like the leafs falling from the trees onto the forest ground

I pluck the sticks out of her hair

Bend down to take a tear into my mouth

The taste of her pain making my body sing

I whisper in her ear that she will never tell anyone of what happens here or I will kill her

I tell her to accept her fate, to be happy that I am to bestow her with this gift

I begin to do what I came here for

As she stares blankly up at the sky

Never uttering a thing

This is really good and your choice of words are excellent, but, I must add, with the really long lines, it looks awkward and clumsy. I recommend turning those long lines into two, shorter lines so the poem looks more smooth and less awkward. Other then that, good work!

Wow, this poem basically disgusted me. I am sure that was what you were going for, and you did a good job. I have a hard time giving you criticism or praise, as this poem really made me want to vomit. You portrayed the villan very well. My only real criticism is that you should probably rate this work, 16+, since I think it would be inappropriate for anyone under that age to read this. I know this is probably of no help, but I have very little to say.