We are the brave ones

Giving up
Isn't an
Option
Anything done
Now is
Worth it
In
The
Long
Run,
We are
Better off.
I'm not
Scared
Anymore.

Backing down
is bull
No excuse
Will get
You out
of it
We
Are
Stronger
Than
That.
We must
Be braver
And more
Educated then
Our enemies.
War waits
For
No
One.

Interesting piece but, it did not really seem to flow. It had great voice and showed the emotion of how people feel when there is a conflict. Excellent; it really drew you in. Great job

You are confusing me... The punctuation is needed badly, but still you put it in some lines. Now you can say that this is poetic like others who are trying to get out with that. I like your theme and motives in this poem, but the scheme, the structure is ruining your thoughts. Oh, and the poem is a bit confusing in the middle part. If you want the truth, the rhythm is bad. But it can be improved by choosing other words or different structure.