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blacktiger3915 · 2008-04-12T19:26:58Z

I wrote this free-verse poem in the 10th grade. My classmates liked it, but what do you think? Getting tired of the real world? Can’t get the boy or girl you want? Want to go on the dream vacation? Want to fly in the sky? Touch the moon? Ride on a rainbow? Do you want to sing on American Idol, but can’t? Want to be in the NBA, NHL, PGA, NFL, or maybe NASCAR? Want to have Bill Gates’ money? Tour through Willie Wonka’s Chocolate Factory and eat chocolate all day? Kick butt beside Neo in the Matrix? Want a pet T-Rex? Fight Jet Li and Jackie Chan at the same time? Rule the world? Jump in a pool full of Jell-O? Go to the top of Mt. Everest and shout your name? Build a house on Mars? Walk on water? Marry the prettiest actress or the most handsome actor? You can do all of these things, but there is a catch. All you have to do is simply…. Dream.

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Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:57 pm

CK Lynn says... · Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:57 pm

I liked it. Unique. I would, however, change the title to "Simple" as that.

"Just saying none of us want to conquer the world won't stop some other idiot from trying."
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Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:41 pm

shanan-cat says... · Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:41 pm

Dude, that was AWESOME!

The originality was somethingout of the question! (is that how you spell it?)

Keep on writing,
Shananners!

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Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:54 am

blacktiger3915 says... · Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:54 am

Thank ya'll very much. I'm happy now.

Don't send sheep to kill a wolf.

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Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:37 pm

casey_kent says... · Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:37 pm

I love your poem.

Dreams. Aaah. Good feeling. When people tell me to stop dreaming because I know it's impossible anyway, I ignore them and tell them that there's absolutely no problem with dreaming. It's free.

Dreams are wonderful. Therefore, your poem is wonderful too.

Great job, great poem.

Keep writing!

Peace man,
Casey the Awesome

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I may not be perfect but Jesus thinks I'm to die for.

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Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:52 am

blacktiger3915 says... · Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:52 am

Thank you casey_kent! I love having dreams. They're wonderful! I love your sig! Jesus is great. Keep praising Him and you will be blessed

. Anyway, best wishes!