"Howling"

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[pre]"Howling"

Shining brightly among the stars.
Seeing their smiles,
Only shining brighter.
The clouds that blanket me
make the world dreary and cold.
the shadows are hidden by
the darkness around them.
Round and full of love,
crimson as blood.
Half shaded and half luminous
and bright.
Yellow, very forgiving.
Fully hidden, trying to remain by
my lonesome.
Every blue moon, special and true.

~ Kazie[/pre]




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K i am soo the moon in this! anyone out there? BAH lol.
"I am the darkness that dwells inside of my heart."

~ Kazie




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Hmm... I think this one is pretty good. Deep. ^_^ I'm not too sure about the whole meaning behind it, but your words flowed together nicely, in my opinion.

Nice work!

~*Sydney*~
Formerly known as Silly Sydstix... as well as Aquarius Angel.




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This is like the 5th poem I commented that was yours, I think? But anyways this is awsome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 9/10


I love your poetry- its just so incredible and awsome. It kicks ass!


request: perhaps you should write a story- with your artistic word use it'll be a beautiful peice of writting.
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I think I only read two of your works so for and I can tell that you are an outstanding writer. Keep it up and I will be happy to read more of your writings.
Don't send sheep to kill a wolf.



When one is highly alert to language, then nearly everything begs to be a poem.
— James Tate