Let Lust do the Talkin' (Age: You must be dead to read)

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See him?
You can't have that
Why?
Because somebody else has him already
Would it stop me?
No
Would she make things harder?
Possibly
Would it be fun to take?
Hell yah

I sit and wait until she is gone
He's sittin' all alone
I'm waitin' with my heart beatin'
My hands twitchin'
My lust speakin'
"Take him now take him"
"What could go wrong?"
"Irrisistable"

Knowin' I want him so much
He wants me too
We leap at each 'nother
Grab onto him
Squeeze me
Rippin' our clothes off
Touchin' each another
Letting our libido do all the movin'
Letting our lust do all the talkin'

Movin' 'round faster than a race
not carin'
Breathin'
Let this be a
Secret
'cause it ain't like nobody is
Gonna understand this

---Dedicated to Roy---




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I'M DEAD!!!!

this was an interesting poem...to say the least. sort of awkward, not really an award winner or anything but, ya know, it was good for what it was.

oh wait...*gasp* i can't say anything! i'm dead
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Yes you are. But that means you can read it but how can you read it if you are dead?
:gasp: I am here so therfore it must mean that I am dead to... I'M COMING ST FLUFFENSTIEN!!!!!!!!




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I didn't get drawn into this poem. It was good everything was technically correct and great use of language. Just I think, I dunno I couldn't feel the chemistry coming off it the chemistry that this poem is all about. I dunno, why. Also the word libido made me giggle slightly, which I think again drew away from it.

However it was a good attempt and it offered me enjoyment :) plus what do know.
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I DON'T DO ANYHTHING....

Or so you think :poofs away:

LOL I just felt like using libido because it is the real term for "horny"




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Please dont tell me this is what I think it is... Your thirteen darling!




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You're funny.... undarling!!!

My life, my body, I learned that. Dont worry...... if I end up having a kid I'll name it Emma... unless it's a boy... maybe Elmer :-P

JK there will be no baby ok? And I coudl always push people off cliffs if they touch me.... TO SCOTLAND!!!




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What? you already had it?




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no i didn't have IT..... why the heck are you asking me here...

Why the heck am I answering?!?!?!




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Okay i'll forget i saw that that i think.
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yes... hmm, maybe I should consider getting rid of a lot of my things... hmm... Yes, I should, I should. Hmm... *covers your eyes* You're too young Vernon!



Almost all absurdity of conduct rises from the imitation of those whom we cannot resemble.
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