Lost Dreams

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Lost dreams, forgotten dreams.
Songs unheard,
Tales untold.
All go to the dream king.
Hope for Peace




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hmm..

Pretty good.
It was small and simple though.
Didn't really have much meaning.

But maybe that was the point, or if not, maybe it has a meaning to you.

If not, then simple poems are always fun.

Keep writing!

-Brooke
"Every-thing's broken there's no way around
It's so hard to smile
When you bring me down."
-
Me.



Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind