"A little nuts maybe" Writing Challenge 3/20

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“A concrete wall of massive destruction”
That’s what he considered himself.
So ready to achieve and willing to succeed

“A huge disgrace to the human race”
That’s what others considered him.
So ready to be punched and fall to the ground

Inside of everyone hides a little nut
"His nut’s on the outside..."
Last edited by Chandni on Tue Mar 28, 2006 1:55 am, edited 2 times in total.
I should not keep on, I'll just creep on creepin'on.




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Hilarious because its weird al.
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I liked this, and I can't explain why. I apologize for just...you know...giving you a useless comment and wasting a little smitch of internet space.
Carpe Diem.




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Xanthan: come on girl, live with it! FREEDOM OF POST!!! :P

I liked this, cute though... Weird Al is humerous, and would enjoy this poem... if I thought he had the capacity to be able to understand it :P




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I think you need to add puncuation. It will look neater,more organised, and better written.


Other than that, I liked it. I don't know why, I just enjoyed reading it.


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