Soft and pretty.
"Tired with the burden of haunting" is a great image. Or idea or whatever.
Nice job. You say alot with so few words.
Siempre, siempre: jardin de mi agonia, tu cuerpo fugitivo para siempre, la sangre de tus venas en mi boca, tu boca ya sin luz para mi muerte. -From 'Del amor imprevisto', Federico Garcia Lorca
well this is def a haiku and i like the imagery a lot but i prefer it when the sentences don't go over more than one line - that's just me of course and not everyone is going to think that so don't worry too much.
i like the idea of a 'heavy' ghost as ghosts are always thought of as being pretty weightless. lol
Someday, everything is going to go right for you, and it will be so wonderful you won't even know what to do. — Hannelore Ellicott-Chatham, Questionable Content
