Hey people
this is my first book I'm actually going to stick to (i think)
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Chapter one: Finding the Stairs
Sweat poured down James Herwing’s face as he made his way through the forest. “He went this way” said a deep voice not far behind him, a small amount of sunlight filtered through the high branches as the sun reached the middle of the sky.
The sound of a stream came from James’s left he knew the city guards would look for him there first so he veered his bike to the right. The trees this side of the path grew much closer together and James found it hard to ride in any straight direction. Half an hour later James emerged from the forest and found himself standing on the edge of a massive canyon. “Damn” James said frowning; he turned around and sat down under one of the trees. James looked out over the canyon; birds flew across his field of vision as he admired the size of it. Fifteen minutes later James was woken from his day dream by the sound of approaching footsteps, James quickly jumped up and hid behind the tree he had been sitting under.
A man wearing midnight blue robes and carrying a staff with a blood red orb balanced on top, walked out of the trees and stood on the edge of the canyon. He looked over each shoulder and tapped a small rock on thee edge of the canyon, James wondered why somebody would dress like that. Without warning a deep rumbling came from deep within the cliff face, slowly stone steps began to slide out of the rock face. As the man began to descend James decide to follow him, he crept out from behind the tree and saw the steps begin to slowly slide back into the rock as the man went. As quietly as he could James quickly walked down the stairs after the man.
They man continued to walk down the stairs for ten minutes, James had began to get cold as the reached the bottom of the canyon. The man took out a candle and started walking down a short flight of stairs that descended into a tunnel in the rock face. James saw the man go in and quietly walked to catch up with the light. The tunnel walls towered either side of James as the man walked purposefully down the stairs with deep strides. A golden glow appeared as the stairs swerved left to revel the end of the tunnel.
James knew he couldn't’t go out there in the light so he hung back until the man had disappeared into the room on the other side. He quickly walked forward and peeked around the edge of the door to see yet another tunnel with two huge golden doors at the end. The man stopped at a huge gold desk and sat in the high back chair at the end. “Well, come forward” the man said in a voice the echoed all around the tunnel, before he could stop himself James stepped into the light and began to approach the desk.
To Jame's surprise the man smiled as he said “So you have found your way to the land of Nagroel”. James said nothing but stared at the old man with a confused expression, “Sit down and I will explain” the man said. James sat down on the small gold stool and looked up at the man with questioning expression. The man began to tell the tale of Nagroel…
“For hundreds of years the people of earth have lived without the knowledge that they were connected to another world, there are only three main entrances, one in New Zealand, one in Egypt and the other here in Britain. Of course there are small portals all over the world in disguise such as mirrors and springs. The reason our people hide is because we are a Magak, or magic as you say it, using world.”
Jame's face turned into a look of disbelief, “If you don’t believe me go home” the man said angrily. “I do believe you, it’s just… Magak” James said speaking for the first time. The man’s gaze softened, He lifted his hand and murmured something James couldn't’t hear, the room turned dark as small glowing orbs of coloured light appeared and floated around the room. The balls of light popped into a shower of golden sparks as light was returned to the room. Jame's mouth fell open in surprise. “Now you have two choices” Said the man as he took out a small yellow envelope “Number one take this envelope and go through the doors behind me or Number two go back to your world and forget everything you ever saw”. James knew he could never go back to the city so he held out his hand for the envelope. “Good choice” the man said passing over the envelope, “Before I open this what is your name?” James asked. “I always forget to tell people my name, Adion” he said chuckling. James peeled off the wax seal and took out three pieces over paper yellow with age, the first one said
Dear Mr. Herwing
Welcome to the land of Nagroel. We are the Academy of Magak, as you are young we would like to offer you a place here at A.M. Of course we would offer you a scholarship to pay for all your equipment and studies, but if you wish to buy anything else in the vast shopping district you would have to apply for a job. You will be expected in the chamber through the gold doors as soon as you have finished have finished with Adion
Yours kindly
The Academy Of Magak
James set down the letter took out a very long list written in the same scrawly writing
You’re Equipment List
1 Iron/Silver Cauldron
1 Ritual Dagger
1 Book pack
Parchment and Assorted Pens
4 Black Ritual Candles
1 Orb Organiser
3 Sets of Official A.M Uniform
2 Cloaks with A.M Fastening Clip
4 Sets of Causal Clothes
1 Set of Formal Robes
1 Staff with Orb
1 Beginner Magic Carpet
1 Periscopic Satchel
Any pets may be kept in your rooms or the outdoor animal sanctuary (will be brought by school).
You will receive all necessary school issue items upon your arrival
James placed this on top of his letter and pulled out a small card on it was
A.M Scholarship Student
Name: James Herwing
Age: 12
Height: 5.3
Weight: 34 kg
Notes:
Give accesses to all school areas and shops.
NEW student!
This counts as a late pass
James put down the card and looked at Adion, “Are you ready to go through” Adion said with a smile. James gave a sharp nod and stood up; Adion got up and walked over to the doors. Placing his palm against the doors he muttered an incantation and the doors began to swing inwards. James looked out into a giant circular chamber; in the middle of the room was a semi-circle desk with clerks talking to other children that had come through like James. 3 other doors stood around the room, James asked
Adion why there was three because he had said there were only three passages to the other world and they were using the first one. “The fourth one connects all the lose passages like mirrors and pools” he answered as a lady wearing blood red robes and a gold belt came up to the pair. “You must be James” she said, James nodded and turned around to say goodbye to Adion but he had already walked back through the doors.
“Come on we’ll go get your school stuff, oh by the way my names Jane” she said lading him over to the desk. “Pass” the clerk barked and James handed over the plastic two- sided pass. The clerk tapped it with his finger, passed it back to James and said “Next”. Jane led James to small door standing upright on its own; she unclipped a small gold key and placed it in the keyhole in the centre of the door, she grabbed James sleeve and they disappeared.
Just an idea. 
