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Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:26 pm
lakegirls says...



Hi,
This story is based on partially real events. Dakota, Rory and Delilah were best friends, they told each other everything, secrets, dreams and even fears. That was in Junior High and now the void between Junior High and High School has torn them apart. When they had declared to be best friend's forever they buried a time capsule with their treasures. Dakota wants to go and retrieve her treasures and to find out what really happened between the three of them, but will Rory and Delilah show?

I hope you enjoy it! Rip it apart!

Love,
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Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:14 pm
Awake says...



Hey girly!

it was really good. The flash backs in dates where a bit confusing. But other then that I liked it. This isn't a advanced review but I wanted to leave a little note after I read it!

I heart You!

Awake
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Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:10 pm
lxtmidnight says...



Here is my full crit!

I don't have Word, so I save everything as RTF files so that they can be opened with Word. But since YWS won't let me upload the rtf, you can click on the link below to get it.

http://freewebs.com/lxtmidnight/the%20button.rtf
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