Hi all,
Before I post more, It would be greatly appreciated if I get your opinions.
I am writing a story focusing around a girl Tory who is abused by her mom who is an alchoholic. She finds it very hard to tell things to anyone, even her best friends. Even her best friend Nick who she tells everything too, she can't tell this to. Her English class gets assigned a research paper on abuse, but when Tory runs out because she can't handle it her teacher thinks twice. After Tory thinks about it more, she wants to continue to do the research paper for extra credit. The day she hands her paper in, she bumps into someone and accidentally hands in her journal. She has a journal called ,"my life" where she writes poems, letters, and just feelings about her abuse. Her journal gets collected as her paper instead. When the school starts taking action about all her entries, people start finding out. They all think she is making it up for attention. When Nick finds out, he can't even look at her. By the end of the book Tory's mom will be arrested and Tory will meet her father.
What are your thoughts about this as a story? Anything is welcomed!
Thunderdude- Thank you I will change that. How about this. The person she bumps into is her teacher, and her teacher thinks her journal is her paper. Tory takes her paper assuming it's her journal and puts it in her bag... OR She doesn't realize that her journal fell on the floor and her teacher thinks that is part of her paper including the actual paper? Okay, and last, the paper is over a period of a week. During a documentary about abuse Tory runs out, because she can't handle it. Her teacher realizes that she overlooked it, and decides to cancel it. Later Tory wants to still to the paper for extra credit.
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