Oy. I'm presently building a world that's been sitting on the backburner for ages now, and I'm cracking it open from the beginning. There isn't much there at the moment: the creation myth as told by a specific race that'll be one of three major focuses (also the creation myth I've dubbed true for the world), and then a condensed timeline of massive events that lead to the race's present-day.
Honestly, I'm just looking for thoughts and feedback. Sharing my work helps me stay motivated to keep, like, working on it, so anything you offer is greatly appreciated!
Also, I'll ask that you ignore the very obvious grammar mistakes, tense slips and typos for now. I'll get at them when everything else is finalized.
A link to that is here:
http://elder.writerfeedpad.com/31
Other things that are coming, and I'll add their links as I finish them!
Sendorai Timeline:
Sendorai Folklore:
The Eternal Generation:
Nau Au Timeline:
Spirit world Timeline:
Expanse Information:
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