Idea #1
Spoiler! :
First off, this idea is sprouting off of a short story I wrote, Brenna of Koreth. (If you want to read to get to know my original idea) I've reworked the plot outline a bit for a novel or longer fantasy story.
The entire story revolves around two characters, an upperclass girl named Brenna, and the idea of fate. By that I mean that "Fate" is a real concept, and he has a consciousness and certain powers, such as powers relating to the future and being able to change from solid form to a thing I like to call "abstract thought".
Brenna's family desend directly from one of the seven original founders of her kingdom, Koreth. This makes her family a family of Lords, Ladies, and in some cases, powerful generals. Her father is one of the most important generals in history, as was his ancestors before him. Therefore, Brenna had a very wide range of education topics, from politics to hand-to-hand combat. She has been preparing all her life for her ceremony that would acknowledge her as a Lady of the Koreth people. If you read my story, this is all explained in more detail.
Eventually, she meets Fate, although she doesn't know it. He tells her that she is meant to be more than a pretty display piece to the public, and leads her on an adventure that leads her to her own "fate". She discovers a plot to overthrow the King, and begins trying to take the organization down. But, is she really fighting on the right side? Turns out, the King has some secrets of his own, and some are secrets that will change Brenna's future forever.
(Now, I'm not completly done with outlining the plot yet, so this may not be the most wonderful description, but I do hope it can peak your interest.)
The entire story revolves around two characters, an upperclass girl named Brenna, and the idea of fate. By that I mean that "Fate" is a real concept, and he has a consciousness and certain powers, such as powers relating to the future and being able to change from solid form to a thing I like to call "abstract thought".
Brenna's family desend directly from one of the seven original founders of her kingdom, Koreth. This makes her family a family of Lords, Ladies, and in some cases, powerful generals. Her father is one of the most important generals in history, as was his ancestors before him. Therefore, Brenna had a very wide range of education topics, from politics to hand-to-hand combat. She has been preparing all her life for her ceremony that would acknowledge her as a Lady of the Koreth people. If you read my story, this is all explained in more detail.
Eventually, she meets Fate, although she doesn't know it. He tells her that she is meant to be more than a pretty display piece to the public, and leads her on an adventure that leads her to her own "fate". She discovers a plot to overthrow the King, and begins trying to take the organization down. But, is she really fighting on the right side? Turns out, the King has some secrets of his own, and some are secrets that will change Brenna's future forever.
(Now, I'm not completly done with outlining the plot yet, so this may not be the most wonderful description, but I do hope it can peak your interest.)
Idea #2
Spoiler! :
So, this one is completly different than the other one. It's kind more present-day and sci-fi.
After the first attempt at human cloning, which fails horribly, people begin to protest against the creation of clones. The government pass a law prohibiting any more research or attempts at human cloning. But for some scientists, this is t acceptable. When their "above ground" cloning facilities are closed, all the scientists for human cloning team up together and create illegal cloning facilities, far away from human civilization. Which their brilliant minds, they eventually succeed in the first human clone, the DNA taken off of dead or stillborn infants. Because these infants never got to grow up, nobody would recognize their clones.
So eventually they get another fantastic idea. Why not give these clones weird genetic mutations too? So, thus comes about our good old superhuman clones.
Not long after that, the government begins to suspect that some people could still be cloning after it is noticed a cloning facility has been tampered with. Quickly, the scientists erase all evidence of their experiments. They put the clone babies up for adoption, after making their "powers" dormant until they could personally activate them.
The story revolves around one of the adopted clones, who thinks she's just a normal person. But, the scientists are on the hunt for their clones, and she's in danger. The girl (I don't have a name for her yet) finds out, and goes on a mission to find the other clones, still reeling from her discovery. Eventually, the government gets involved, and is trying to find these clones before the scientists. So, the clones have another set of people to be afraid of. The whole story is basically the clones learning about their pasts, powers, and bonding together to fight for their rights as superhuman beings.
(So, same as the other one, I apologize for any hasty explanations, because I'm not totally sure about the plot yet.)
After the first attempt at human cloning, which fails horribly, people begin to protest against the creation of clones. The government pass a law prohibiting any more research or attempts at human cloning. But for some scientists, this is t acceptable. When their "above ground" cloning facilities are closed, all the scientists for human cloning team up together and create illegal cloning facilities, far away from human civilization. Which their brilliant minds, they eventually succeed in the first human clone, the DNA taken off of dead or stillborn infants. Because these infants never got to grow up, nobody would recognize their clones.
So eventually they get another fantastic idea. Why not give these clones weird genetic mutations too? So, thus comes about our good old superhuman clones.
Not long after that, the government begins to suspect that some people could still be cloning after it is noticed a cloning facility has been tampered with. Quickly, the scientists erase all evidence of their experiments. They put the clone babies up for adoption, after making their "powers" dormant until they could personally activate them.
The story revolves around one of the adopted clones, who thinks she's just a normal person. But, the scientists are on the hunt for their clones, and she's in danger. The girl (I don't have a name for her yet) finds out, and goes on a mission to find the other clones, still reeling from her discovery. Eventually, the government gets involved, and is trying to find these clones before the scientists. So, the clones have another set of people to be afraid of. The whole story is basically the clones learning about their pasts, powers, and bonding together to fight for their rights as superhuman beings.
(So, same as the other one, I apologize for any hasty explanations, because I'm not totally sure about the plot yet.)
I would really appreciate any thoughts, feedback or suggestions anyone can provide. Which one should I stick with? Idea 1, Idea 2, or neither? Thanks!
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