That's why I started out by asking you questions about things that I saw as potential issues: to make sure they were actually issues before I suggested improvements.
If you had provided the cultural context earlier, a lot of the above discussion based on assumptions and speculation could have been avoided.
We cannot read your mind and see what you have planned or why you think the idea deserves to be written; you have to show us that by providing us with enough information to understand what you are trying to do and how you want it to work out.
There are a lot of problems with your concept as-presented, and based on how it was presented, the rest of the people in this thread have commented and provided opinions as requested. You should still consider these opinions regardless of whether you agree with them or not because they apply to how you presented your idea, and if the posts here are any indication of how strongly people feel about how you'll be representing Native Americans, the presentation is in need of a complete rethink.
With that said, I have a few more questions.
Where does the tribe live?
What model of wolf behavior are you working from?
Why is the moon a goddess?
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