Bittersweet December

I can't help but breathe a sigh
And think of all the lies
Whenever I hear your name
All it brings is pain

My phone has stopped ringing,
But I can't help thinking
Maybe you'll change your mind
And we'll be able to rewind.

I will never forget that night
Where the moon shined oh so bright,
When you told me you loved me
And my heart gave you the key.

I wish these tears would cease
And my heart would at last be at peace.
But your words still hang in the air
As if you didn't even care.

Someday I hope you remember
That bittersweet December,
When you pull me into your arms.
Oh, I never thought you would bring me harm.

I hope you are thinking of me
And remembering my eyes, blue like the sea.
I hope you will realize that I am what you lack
And wish you could go back

To that bittersweet December.

The first thing that I observe when I read this poem is that unlike much of the dramatic poetry that I read, your poem rhymes. I also think that you pulled that off very well. However, a major problem with this poem is that although you have couplets, it is hard as a reader to know which syllables to put emphasis on. I think you should work on keeping the number of syllables the same within each line of your couplets. That would really make all the difference.
Keep writing!
-Alex

This was amazing. It wasn't very descriptive but it made the reader (or at least me) feel for you because of your heartache. For me though this was more a lyrical poem than a dramatic poem because of the rhymes and the wording. However, all together it was a moving poem

I like the rhyme in this. I agree its quite lyrical actually. I thought it was also quite moving.
One thing that I am picky on though is rhythm and amount of syllables. It's just me, but every poem that doesn't have a constant rhythm feels like a lot of bumps to me, because you think you've got it figured and begin to read it in a certain way, then it bumps.

But don't mind that note, because not everyone is like me. I just like poems that way (in fact I love them that way.)

Anyway, good poem

Spelling: I found "Shined" which should be "Shone"