A world where dreams come true

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There once was a girl who lived in a world

Where all her dreams came true

But she never guessed that when she dreamed of a guest

That you’d show up there too

So alone in her room on that fateful May night

Along you came, a knight

And made none of her dreams come true

Tripping and falling you came into being

In the world where dreams come true

But, never could you guess that you’d be a guest

In a world where dreams come true.




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awesome! no-one really writes poetry like this no more. they all write about people dying and breaking up with their boyfriend etc.

i really like this!
The Best
And Most Beutiful Things,
Cannot Be Seen Or Even Touched.
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This was great! I could realy see this published.
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Great Job. Simple, short, and to the point. Keep up the good work.
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This was very nicely written. I can definitely see this published somewhere or a beginning to a chapter in a novel. It wasn't overly long or too detailed and it kept me reading. Nice job!
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~ Joseph Conrad


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