I Have A 2mm. Hole In My Heart

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I am new to the Young Writers Society. I heard about it through my English teacher who is encouraging us (Creative Writing Club) to get our stuff noticed. So anyways, I'm fourteen, I'm a freshman at A.C. Jones In Beeville, Texas and I basically just want to read others' poetry and get mine read and reviewed (dare I say, criticized) by others as well. So I basically just write poetry. About Life, Love, Religion, Society, etc., and I have to say that my inspiration comes from my music and just anything I see. I like any kind of music but I especially like anything that falls into the genres of: Alternative, Techno, and Rock.

Message me if you'd like to know anything.
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Welcome to YWS! What should we call you?

Don't say "criticized." Say "critiqued." Criticism sounds so ... negative, and although reviewers here can be harsh, they aren't usually mean about it ... just, well, let's say "brutally honest."

(It might be a good idea to just say that you're in Texas. It's not usually a good idea to put your school or town name on the internet.)
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Hi and welcome! I'm newish here too, though I am getting more acquainted with the site. I think you'll really like it, because I know I do.




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Hey there! Welcome to YWS!! I hope you like it here.

Your teacher told you about it? Woah...that's cool. Well I really hope you have fun and do a lot on here with reviweing and stuff. And I would love to take a look at some of your poetry when you post it up.

And um...Go Freshman! Woo!! ^_^


Lots O' Luv,
Lindsay
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

"My desires were bestial, obviously." -Jeffery Dahmer.




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Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm Muffin, or EM, if you prefer.

I'm a freshman too, yay. A lot of people on here are, come to think of it, but still, doesn't mean I can't point it out. :D

So, what's your favorite book? Movie? Food?

PM me if you'd like a critique - I try to give good advice - or need a question answered or anything.

Peace, love, chocolate,
Muffin



Anxiety is the dizziness of freedom.
— Søren Kierkegaard