Gun&Blood Chapter 1 ( Fixed Version )

Sun has already passed this city, leaving human made lights as the only survivors of the day. In that city, on one of the rooftops(,) sits a man covered in (a?) black coat, without a hat (Umm... I don't really care about what he isn't wearing XD), showing his dark brown hair. He holds a textbook in his hands, thinking, what to write next.
‘It’s unbelievable just how much can (remove this "can") something (add a "can") change the way you live… I always wondered, how it is to live in a world without (the) constant danger of being killed just for who you are… Are all of us really that scary to be annihilated?’
He stood up all of a sudden and inhaled as much as he could. “I smell blood(.)” he started running on a rooftop till he saw an emergency ladder on the opposite house, he walked back a bit, sprinted and jumped successfully on that ladder. From the ladder he used window pallets to get to the window he needed to. Once there, he looked in the window to take a look at the situation. Inside was what you call an (I think it is just "a", though I am probably wrong... It just sounds weird to me) usual flat, not rich nor poor, (period) what was out of the place was a man standing with a gun in his hand, pointing at the young woman around an age of 20 (spell out numbers, please). She held her shoulder in pain, bleeding.
“I’ve been searching for you 2(*) days. I’ll make you pay for what you’ve done to me!” that man was certainly furious for some reason (let us assume this, don't state it; makes me feel stupid). The situation was grave , man behind window understood that, he broke part of the window to open it and jumped inside the flat. (Umm... Redo this whole sentence. I understand, but it's just... well, messed up.)
“I don’t think that I’d let you” he said. Man with gun pointed the gun at a newcomer and without any hesitation shot three bullets “See? See? That’s your fault too” he turnt (turned) back at her and immediately shot her , because she tried to kick away the gun but missed as the man unconsciously dodged it by turning around. Bullet penetrated her chest, she was certain to die now. “No mercy for you” the man that was hit by 3 bullets appeared behind the man with gun while he was occupied looking at her dyeing. Injured man swung with the back of handgun to knock the bad one unconscious. Afterward he stepped to her. “I can only offer you a second chance at life, but a hard one. Answer me, do you desire to live?” silence followed his question, she had a distant look in her eyes, her heart was slowly stopping. “Answer me, do you desire to live?” with last effort she brought enough strength to answer “…yes”. Man didn’t hesitate, he crouched and lowered his head to her neck. He bit her just for a moment, she didn’t have that much blood left from the bleeding. Knowing that, the man bit his finger and let a few drops of blood drop on her wounds. Unbelievable happened, wounds healed within few seconds. He checked her heartbeat, she was still alive. Once he was sure, he turnt around and walked to the unconscious man.
“You owe her some suffering and blood” he took one empty medical blood pack out of his coat pocket and started filling it with bad man’s blood, about one liter. Then he took his PDA and looked at wanted roster, that man escaped from prison 2 days ago, police put a reward for anybody who captures him. Seeing that, the man grabbed unconscious one over the shoulder and went on the street, calling police via his PDA. Police came a few minutes later with reward. He accepted the reward and headed back to the flat. He looked through her wardrobes for clothes and personal belongings, he took as much as he could carry in his pockets and over shoulders, then he lifted her with both hands and walked away.

The man reached a small family house in outskirts of town in matter of short time, he definitely could walk fast. Doors weren’t apparently locked, he went in , layed the young woman down on a bed and went to close the doors, he actually had keys. As he walked then back to the bedroom, he couldn’t help but to think. “Will you accept your new life? …Which side then?” those two questions troubled his mind. “Anyway, I guess I’ll just explain her whole matter in short and see what happens”, after walking back and forth for some time, he stopped and hit one hand with another “I’ll get that ready for a test” he searched through shelves until he found what he was looking for, big black custom made handgun. “This brings old memories” he stood on one place for a while, most probably reminding the past. He then opened one shelf with three types of bullet packs, first were bullets with sharpened head, second were explosive bullets and the last ones were silver bullets. Just to make sure, he took a look on his additional clips hung inside of the coat, total 6 of them, three at each side. All were filled with three types of bullets as mentioned. What was fearsome though was that those bullets were of big caliber. Because the clip of the handgun he found was empty, he filled it with sharp-headed bullets. When he finished filling clip, he insert it back in the handgun and layed it on the small table next to bed. “Now all that’s left is to wait” he sighed and walked to the kitchen to make two cups of herbal tea. One of them he put on that small table near the bed, second he held in his hand as he stared at her while leaning against a wall.
He waited there for her to wake up, drinking his tea rather slowly. After some time, she actually woke up, he smiled. As she came back to her senses, she sat up with haste as she didn’t understand where she is.
“I recommend to drink some herbal tea, you were gravely wounded after all” he said. Because it was rather dark in the room, his black clothes camouflaged him and she couldn’t recognize him standing at opposite side of room. She was trembling. “I won’t do anything bad to you, I wouldn’t bother saving you otherwise. Drink some tea” After a few seconds of hesitating she noticed a cup of tea on the small table and a handgun next to it. She took the cup and drank some tea with ease, as it was already cold. After she finished her tea cup, she looked at the gun and actually took it.
“Why is there a gun lying like this?” she wondered. A scary idea popped up in her mind “I.. by any means do not want to threat you” . It looks like she feared that she’d be shot dead or something. He laughed a bit “I expected you to try and get some answers out of me with that gun. You’re quite calm for the situation, I give you a high-five for that” he wrote something down in the textbook.
“Even that scary thoughts appear in my mind, I think that you won’t kill me after keeping me alive , will you?” she looked for the marks after bullet wounds.
“I see you remember what happened. Your calmness makes me think you haven’t encountered troublesome situations first time”
“Indeed” she had a sad look in her eyes, maybe reminding of the past tragedies.
“I won’t ask you what they were now, you’ve got a lot of new information to endure, care to listen?” he put the small textbook in the pocket and walked closer to her.
“I’m curious to know anyway” she looked at him coming closer
“Before that though, I’d like to find out your name. Mine’s Kyousuke”
“Mine’s Mary” . Kyousuke sat down on the bed next to her.
“I’ll tell it in short, you can read some additional information in one of the textbooks I’ll give you. Now listen carefully, I do not like to repeat myself twice. As a human being, you were killed back there. Sounds absurd, doesn’t it? It’s truth, you’re no longer human, I gave you a second chance in this world, but as a different being ; draculina. You must have heard of draculas and vampires in the stories of human nation, they had some truth in them. Difference between the two is also written in the textbook so you’ll find out later. I do not feel like explaining all the stuff about who are draculas and vampires, you’ll read that too. What I’ll tell you though is a question that needs to be answered as soon as possible. I’m a Dracula, at the same time I’m a sweeper, hunter of criminals. As a hunter, I can’t afford to let a dangerous person running around, so the question is simple ; Will you join me as my companion in this world full of dangers, suffer , but still with shining moments, or try to escape? I don’t want to hear an immediate answer, such quick one would be affected by the instinct of survival. The world you’re going to live in is nothing you’ve thought of coming across before. Read the textbook, think it through, take your time. I want a honest answer, I’ll act then according to it” he stood up, took the small textbook, listed through it and put it next to her as she was still absorbing what Kyousuke said. To not disturb her thinking, he went out of the room to kitchen to make himself another tea. He sighed “She’s a complicated being… Take your time” , he sat down and drank his tea.