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My hips started to sway with the beat. I was dancing alone, but from the stares I was receiving, I had a feeling I wasn’t going to be alone for long. It was a party. My good friend Jennifer’s party, and I was going to have a little fun.
I raised my arms over my head, letting my fingers slip through my blonde hair on the way up. I laughed. I knew the guys really wanted me and I was only playing it up. Though, tonight, I was only after one.
“Hey Marissa,” Brian said, walking towards me. Hmm, I thought, it looks like we have a bit of bait. I smiled at him, sliding my arms up his back and around his neck.
“Wanna dance?” I asked, batting my eyelashes. He nodded slightly. My body moved with his. I enjoyed the feel of his hands on my waist. He wasn’t who I was after, but I needed a little warming up.
Brian’s face seemed to crumple as he looked from the exit to me. Anna was crying, dashing for the exit. I had forgotten that she was trying to hook up with him. Ah well, not my loss. It looks like there was going to be more than one heartbreak tonight.
“I’ll be right back,” I whispered, knowing I really wasn’t. Even though the music was blaring in our ears, I still knew he heard me. I walked away quickly, towards the envious stare I’ve been waiting all night for.
“How are you Skylar?” I asked, my blue eyes seductive.
“Alright,” he responded, licking his lips. He was nervous. Good, I thought. “And you?”
“Perfect,” I smiled. “Let’s go outside. Its cooler out on the deck, besides it’s so incredibly beautiful under the stars. Romantic even.” I hid my smirk. I could feel his gaze on me.
“I don’t –“ Skylar started. I shook my head, and grabbed his hand.
“Please,” I pouted. “I don’t want to be lonely.” He seemed to consider this a moment and finally agreed. I led the way through the back door. I could still feel the music’s thump under my feet. I turned to Skylar.
“It is beautiful out, wouldn’t you say?” I asked. I felt my hips brush up against his jeans. His breathing started to get heavier.
“Very,” he replied, looking sideways. I pressed closer to him, lacing my fingers behind his neck. He tensed up, but finally started to relax. He looked down at me and I stood on my tiptoes, barely pressing my lips onto his. I pulled back to see his expression. There was desire, conflict and despair. He wasn’t thinking of her was he? I’ll get rid of that, I thought, a malicious grin starting to form.
I pulled him towards the house again. He followed me, his desire stronger than any other emotion. Well, that just wouldn’t cut it tonight. I wanted him to forget everything. Everything except me.
Upstairs, I found the guest bedroom. Skylar looked around nervously, but as soon as I shut the door and starting walking towards him, all other emotions faded. I smiled triumphantly. This is what I had been working for.
I ran my fingers through Skylar’s silky brown hair and pulled his head to mine. I found his lips were eagerly awaiting my touch. What kind of person would I be if I denied him that?
I pushed him down on the bed, falling over with him. He groaned, almost silently. I pulled his shirt up and felt his bare skin with my hand. I saw a light shine on in the room and looked up, distracted.
“Marissa!” Jennifer yelled. “How could you possibly even think about doing this?” Tears were dripping off her cheeks and onto the fluffy white carpet. I shrugged. She may be my friend but it doesn’t mean I have to give up Skylar just because they were dating now.
“I wanted him,” I laughed. “Now you’ve gone and spoiled it.” She looked completely and utterly heart-broken. I rolled my eyes.
“Are you seriously crying?” I asked. Jennifer shook her head and bolted out of the room. What a wimp, I thought, chuckling.
I looked back at Skylar. It was obvious the mood was gone but the look on his face shocked me. There was pain, regret, horror, and rage. He was angry with me.
“What were you even thinking!?” Skylar shouted. “Now Jennifer hates me as well as you.” It would be a challenge to try to get him now. I smiled. I loved challenges. I put on an innocent, regretful face.
“Skylar, I’m so sorry. I really liked you. Since I first moved a year ago and when Jennifer told me that you were her’s I backed off, “ I said.
“What are you talking about? Jennifer and I weren’t even together then,” Skylar responded.
“I know. To her you’re just some sort of price, but I really care about you. I just got carried away,” I sighed. “You still hate me don’t you?”
“Of course not, Marissa,” he replied. “It doesn’t matter, I guess. Jen and I are through.” I hugged him carefully. I didn’t want to go to fast.
“Well, we could always –“I started. “Nevermind.”
“What is it?” Skylar asked.
“Well it’s just that I still like you, and I don’t know how you feel,” I replied, batting my eyes. I could practically feel his desire. He wanted me and I knew it. No amount of heartbreak could stop me.
“I can’t say I feel the same,” Skylar responded, monotonously. “Not after tonight. Not ever.”
“But-“I said.
“Save it,” he laughed sadly. “You can have any other guy you want, so go play your sick little games with them. Just leave me alone.” With that said, Skylar left. Hadn’t I felt his desire? He wanted me! I knew it! He had too, no one ever refused me! I would find him. I’ll try everything, I thought, he has to fall for me. Then once he does I’ll dump him hard, just like every other guy.
I got up off the bed. Maybe I had failed tonight, but soon I would find him while he was already down. I would break his fragile little heart. I grinned. I would really enjoy this one. My greatest challenge yet. I wouldn’t fail. I never do. I would just have to wait until the time was right.
I strode down the steps, smiling as my other little projects stared covetously at me. Beaming, I strode towards my car. I didn’t have time to waste with these fools. Skylar would fall for me. He would fall hard. I would make sure to make our break-up extra painful. He was actually making me work. I drove away. I needed my sleep. Tomorrow was going to be a very busy day.
Thanks for posting in my WRFF thread, I always love to read your work! 
There are just a couple of areas I think could be a little improved on- when they are in the club I didn't get much of a sense of what it was like. I thought it was good how you commented on the music but maybe something on the surrounding people, the dancing, the stuffy atmosphere or things like that would better set the scene. The first boy, Brian, I think could do with a bit more description as to how he is responding to her and his expression as I didn't really get how he felt about her flirting. You could also use this part to describe the party a bit more, perhaps instead of saying 'said' and 'asked' in their conversation you could say something about having to call over the music or when he is walking he could be weaving through a few dancing couples.
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