Perfect is just a word,
But it causes so much pain.
Pressure, yet another word
That I look on with disdain.
Aching, I criticize myself,
Because I am not good enough.
When, oh when will I be able
To unlock my pressuring cuff?
EDIT:
Perfect is just a word,
but it causes so much pain.
Pressure, yet another
that I look on with disdain.
Despondent, I criticize myself,
because I'm not good enough.
When, oh when, will I be able
to unlock my pressuring cuff?
Does anyone think this sounds better? I took suggestions from both the comments, and I like it better.
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