Hi! I am very new to writing poetry. I usually prefer writing novels.
Anyway, I came up with some random lines off the top of my head.
I figure they'll need A LOT of criticism, even though I plan to do nothing with them. Haha.
So, tear it to shreds. Correct me on rhyme schemes (which I didn't even consider when writing), grammar, lines, etc.
Dream
Beauty flashing in the night
Wondrous images of starlight.
Wishes pass before my eyes
All my wants I visualize.
Then I wake,
And my heart begins to ache
Because the world that seems
Is just a fantasy of my dreams.
Thanks for reading, if you clicked! As I said, feel free to post "ripping to shreds" comments. I'll take it all in good heart! Haha. I sound WAY to happy on here.
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