Sondro

Didn't use the tablet for this. Did it a while go in fact. Just a character from my deviantART thing, XD. Thought it would be fun to put here.

Wow... That's a short skirt... *Stops staring long enough to write the review*

Hello my name's Beth and I really like this picture. The perspective and proportions are really very good, something I tend to struggle with so a big well done to you *takes my hat off to you* I only have one little nit pick, the hands. I don't know if you've done this on purpose but they seem a little too big, either that or there's something wrong with my eyes. I like the colours and the subtle but noticable shading, quite bright but fairly delicate colours. You notice them (obviously) but you don't find them too offensive or outlandish, at least I don't.

I hope this has helped a little, love Beth x

Hey I'm Leopard and I'm here to review your pic, Gamergirl.

Gamergirl wrote:Didn't use the tablet for this.

Wow - you're good! Can't believe you didn't use a tablet. That's some serious talent you have with a mouse, missy!
I really like it, especially the way you've shaded the hair and the clothes. Thumbs up for your amazing skills!
Here are a couple of things I think you could improve (and believe me it's hard to find things you could make better!)
1. Proportions Your proportions are, in fact, mostly brilliant. I find it hard to ba;ance my drawings alot, especially the hands and legs, so well done. One thing I will say is that her waist is very skinny. It goes in very far aswell, if you know what I mean!
2. Hands Her hands are a bit big, I agree with Betheny. Although I don't see it as a major problem, the outstretched finger is also quite long.
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Woah. Short Skirt. Lol. Very typical Anime style though, haha.
Overall, you've done a very nice job with thgis, Gamergirl. I really liked it!
Keep Drawing!
~Leopard

Hello Gamergirl,

I actually quite liked this. It's definitely better than anything I can do on the computer as I'm not good with computer art software programs and you obviously are. I like the quirky take on anime/manga that you have done. It has some traditional amime/manga characteristics and some extra few things which you have added in yourself which definitely make it more original and unique. I like how it has such a distinctive bold outline and how efficiently you have used colors. Personally I liked this drawing a lot.

The face and the hair was in my opinion a little too plain for anime/manga. Usually anime/manga faces have a lot of detail and colors involved. Most of the facial features were alright but the hair lacked color and blending and it looked a little limp and not as vibrant as most anime/manga hair. I think you need to work on blending colors to create a more interesting look. Overall though this was very good.

The body was very good but I agree with the others. You need to make the hands smaller, the arms are far too skinny in comparison to the hands and it looks a little awkward and unrealistic. I think next time check that the arms are a bit fatter and that the hands are a little smaller because at the moment it just doesn't look right and I think it's one of the main things that you need to work on in this drawing.

The legs and feet are in my opinion the best feature in the whole picture. Yes, the legs are long but they are very well portioned and they don't look too long. They are also just the right shape. The shoes and leg warmers are very cute as well and I like the little lines that you used in the leg warmers to give them shape and texture. It looks very like anime/manga and it's very cute.

Overall you are very good at this kind of art. Never stop drawing things like this and please post more often. This is the first bit of artwork of yours that I have seen and I loved it. Keep up the great artwork and if you have any questions, concerns or you would like another review then please PM me and I would be happy to help you out. You deserve it and it would be my privilege.

From DreamingForever