Stupid writer's block.

This is the result of bored writing.

With this pen I can craft.
I can construct a marvelous mountain with a snow caped peak that reaches to the sky. I can create a sparkling beach. One with white sand connecting to a crystal clear ocean. I can even piece together a made up world! One of my liking. Where music is played from speakers floating in the air. Where the land is pink, purple, and blue! Where the sky is green with orange clouds. A world where the water tastes like bubblegum and food is always delicious!
But darn it! If only this stupid writers block would go away!

If you liked it click the like button please. I had gotten stuck while re-writing a chapter of my novel and came up with this in the middle of class.

ladypurple wrote:This is the result of bored writing.

With this pen I can craft.
I can construct a marvelous mountain that reaches to the sky with snow capping the peak. I can create a sparkling beach. One with white sand connecting to a crystal clear ocean. I can even piece together a made up world! One of my liking. Where music is always played from speakers floating in the air. Where the land if pink, purple, and, blue! Where the sky is green with orange clouds. A world where the water tastes like bubblegum and food is always good!
But darn it! If only this stupid writers block would go away!

If you liked it click the like button please. I had gotten stuck while re writing a chapter of my novel and came up with this in the middle of class.

If you have writer's block, try listening to music (lyricless songs usually work for me) or going on a walk.

TIGERSPRITE wrote:If you have writer's block, try listening to music (lyricless songs usually work for me) or going on a walk.

I don't have it right now it was just a three minute thing.

I love this Lady!!! *Sol clicks "like"*

Very nice I have those issues sometimes too, but my writer's block writing isn't usually as good... *likes*

With this pen I can craft.
I can construct a marvelous mountain that reaches to the sky with snow capping the peak. This sentence seems to be a bit too long. Also, the "with snow capping the peak" is technically referring to the sky since that is the most recent noun that you referenced. If you shifted around the order of words or got rid of the last part completely it would make a lot more sense. I can create a sparkling beach. One with white sand connecting to a crystal clear ocean. I can even piece together a made up world! One of my liking. Where music is always played from speakers floating in the air. delete the word "always", it just adds fluff Where the land is pink, purple, and, blue! Where the sky is green with orange clouds. A world where the water tastes like bubblegum and food is always good! Try to find a more descriptive word than "good". Maybe like delicious or sweet or something like that.
But darn it! If only this stupid writers block would go away! So funny

Over all I liked it a lot. The imagry that you create is really nice and the concept of being able to create anything with just a pen and paper is interesting. Its one of those topics that is so obvious but no one really stops to think about it. I'm glad you did, it made for a nice read! If you have any questions or just wanna talk please PM me!

loved it! *Nike clicks like* AWESOME!
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loved it! *Nike clicks like* AWESOME!
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Yay imagery!
That was really cool.
For writers block, I always listen to some of my favorite bands, usually their music helps me.
Good luck
~WickedWonder

Are you kidding me?! I'm having the same problem.
To me, writer's block is making feel as if I'm sitting on a pile of coal and I'm simply letting it burn my skin, while my hand is clutching to the pen aimlessly and uselessly. Ugh! Doesn't it feel like your heart is promising to jump to your throat an out of your body, if you don't write something meaningful soon? Like a beast vomiting within my guts... and well, I have to say that it makes me very sick.

Blerg, I hate writers' block, too. But that certainly made my soul laugh. You should make that into a poem, it would get a little more attention. This is the best one I've read today, nine-and-a-half out of ten. *Shia desperately searches for the like button, but never finds it* Just imagine there's one more.

Dear LadyP,
I OMG know how you feel. My first work I submitted was about me and my darn writer's block.
So the devotion to it is understood.
It will pass my friend as it always does.
The road to dealing with it I'm afraid, sucks unbarably.
But have no fear, your friends are here!

-The Written Chef

I hope you don't mind me saying so, but your current stuck state inspired me! Ink, a ball point pen and some imagination; yours, of course.



EDIT: drat, it cuts in half. try this link Link

......Wow.........

Funny!