Photoshop that works

5 posts
User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 300
Reviews 0
This is what one does when she is both bored and have photoshop!

Da~ra

This is what my character Annalisa (soon to come) will look like.

SAY IF YOU LIKE IT PLEASE!

Based on a photo because people like me can't draw!
Attachments
Annalisa.jpg
Annalisa.jpg (36.27 KiB) Viewed 272 times
Behind a successful man there is one woman, behind a unsuccessful man there are two women

KISAME RULES THE WORLD BABY

Those who are too smart to engage in politics are punished by being governed by those who are dumber.
- Aristotle




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 2154
Reviews 119
Hi! You obviously have some real talent in photoshopping! This looks like it’s unfinished though, because of the massive neck. I think if you sort that out, it’ll be incredible. I think that the hair could do with a little more definition. One other thing, the ear looks a little out of place, but I think that may be an optical illusion. So, yeah, I really like it. The eyes look eerie and just fantastic. The lips are perfect, they contrast so well with the face that looks unreal, in a good way. Congrats, it’s sort of beautiful, apart from the neck!

~Roon
The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood.

~ Jean Cocteau




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 10870
Reviews 318
Hi RosieBaker! Welcome to the Young Writers' Society. I hope you'll get some good reviews here, as well as do a bit of reviewing, yourself.


The Neck

Well, what Roon said about the neck. I mean, unless you're making some sort of wacky creature with the head of a human and the body of a giraffe, you can cut off about half of it.

The Eyes

I can see that they are going to come out very nicely, but right now, they're just orbs. They're blank and deceitful. You have the form right; in fact, the whole shape of the eye and the way it is set into the face is perfect. However, the eyes need to have pupils and irises, as well as a little white glimmer of light to show the the character is actually alive. Well, in the paradox of cartoonism/anime/manga, I'm not sure if you'd call her [i]alive[i] ... but whatever.

The Ears

They definitely need to be higher up. Your ears are almost in line with your eyes, believe it or not. However, you have made an excellent drawing of them!

The Mouth

I like the bold purplish color, and the shape is great. Nice job!

The Nose

As with the mouth, perfect. Flawless.

Shading

You did an excellent job shading the drawing, giving it an airbrushed look. However, as Roon said, the hair is sort of blurry. Maybe darken the color and make it look a bit shinier?

Overall

I like it! I like it very much! It needs a bit of work, but you are definitely on the path to perfection. Keep working!




Random avatar
Gender Female
Points 2840
Reviews 28
Wowww!!!! That's cool. A little scary, yes, but cool.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 44887
Reviews 816
Hi, Rosie, Pink here :)
Yay, Photoshop is amazing!
I have it too and I love it, just wish I had a new tablet >.<
Anyways, I like how soft the skin looks, very neat. I also love how you did the nose, quite realistic.
The eyes need to be softer and more sharp, right now they look a little blurred. Same thing with the hair, I think that needs to be darkened and sharpened too. It looks smudged and doesn't give the full realistic effect that the rest of the picture does.
Other than that, it's a good picture. The eyes are creepy but that's just character at work, haha. Oh yeah, I like the lips! Super cool :)
Keep it up,

~Pink
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham



There is nothing to fear from someone who shouts.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart