Because - Chap. 10

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OMG!! I love love loved this chapter!

This story is just getting better and I will say this again: This story is way better then Prom Night. I've been waiting for another chapter of this great story and you didn't disappoint. Will Sheldon is my favorite character and I know he shouldn't be but you make it so hard not to like him. Your character is believable and I love the way you described the car. A real beaut ^_^

My heart literally stopped when Will touched her on her cheek. I don't know what I would do in that type of situation but I know for one thing I would not be able to breathe. Well you know I'm not good at pointing out grammatical errors and such but I didn't see any...I think.

I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Keep writing amazing stories,

~Angel

Angel of Death:

Wow, thanks You make me want to post the next chapter right now! But again, thanks for reading. The next chapter is already written and ready to go... I just have to get more reviews and points in.

KJ

Wow, KJ, just wow. Your writing belongs on the shelves of bookstores around the world. I enjoy your writing more than Stephenie Meyer's writing. As always, I was not able to find anything that needed to be fixed. Your writing is completely flawless.

It felt like it took forever for you to post this chapter. I was losing my patience, but, now that I have read the chapter, I know it was worth the wait. Please, post the next chapter tonight!

-Venom

Oh jeez! That might have been your best chapter yet! You had me on the edge of my seat once again! I'm heading over to read chapter 11 right now-after I finish this review, that is. I didn't see any mistakes, just pure talent, and as a matter of fact, I agree with Venom-your writing totally belongs there with the great authors (and it's way better than Stephenie Meyer ). I only have one complaint about this story so far. I think you need to do something about her flashbacks because I get confused as to if it's in the present or past. Maybe you could italicize? I don't know, just a thought I had there, and I was compelled to share! So anyway, I can't wait to read what happens next-good job!
P.S. Your characters are so life-like I can almost see them standing next to me, acting the entire story out! It's a great thing, to write like that. Keep up the good work!

WrittenSoul:

I'm... speechless. Thanks for your review. It was quite overwhelming.

As to your uncertainty to when it's past and present, just thought I should let you know that every other chapter is one of each. Always. I never break the pattern. Since this one is past, the next one will be present. And so on and so forth. Hope this clear that up

Thanks for reading. Your guys' support is what keeps me writing.

Whoa. Excellatte chapter!

You are doing such a wonderful job with Mr. Sheldon that he is beginning to remind me of a creep that used to stalk one of my good friends. . . . . .*shivers* And, unfortunately, I'm very serious. But that means that you're being realistic, so that's good, right?

He also sounds like the type of psycho that would live on the east coast.

KJ-
Whoa. That did not just happen. Oh my god! That did just happen.

Man, this story is getting intense and intenser every moment. I just love it.

I have to stop talking and read eleven. Bye!

-Merry