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Re: Kiss me *freewrite*
This was... different, lol. Good, but different. Just a few tips. You should be very careful of how much action and description you put in one sentence. Some of your ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: How to Forget ch 1
this was really cool. it sounds like something that would happen in my school, lol. just a few little grammar mistakes in there and the italics were kind of confusing ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Mercy
what exactly is the meaning of the title? is it one of the characters' names? other than those little confusions, it was really really good and cute.
Mar 19, 2009